|Reviews for Forgiven|
| phoenixmagic1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
this is an interesting take on H/W friendship...great job :)
| paulac45 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Well written - but would have preferred if you didn't have him die at the end!
| lilawonder chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
*SNIFF* Interesting use of interior monologue and distorted thinking it really allowed you to explore the House Wilson dynamic in an fresh way. Kudos.
| Shadow Cat65 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
You're writing has really improved! Thus was good. I did *not* expect that ending.
Forgiven was the perfect length, too. It needed to be short, and you weren't afraid to do that.
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Wow that was really good. I was crying when Wilson read the note and didn't stop when I realized what was really going on. Very nice twist.
| MadScientistGirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
What a great story. I like how when Wilson goes, they are both at peace with each other. Great fake out on who was the character death.
| Diva In The House chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Well done, Lori. Your writing just keeps getting stronger, and you have a wonderful grasp on the whole H/W relationship.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
| micetea chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
That was great but sad too"( I wish there was a chance to save Wilson! Just a great story!
| Visitkarte chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I loved it! Creepy, nightmarish, great. Thank you.
| rividori chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Oh poor Wilson. Such an emotional ride. I didn't know what to expect. Well done!
| i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 12/27/2009