Awesome story dear author and hopefully you can update soon. I hope the civilian council members get their just desserts when Tsunade returns as the Hokage.

What's up with the power levels in this fanfic? Why is Naruto so afraid of meeting Temari, but he didn't even notice the nukenin a month ago. He has so many powers, strong as shit, but a girl with a fan is too much? Or is this another case of ideotia with "women are scary"?

This is... The dumbest, most unrealistic chapter ever. Literally every sentence is cringe-inducing.

Naruto's Sharingan... how stupid is that?

Ok, continuing on. This chapter was ROUGH for me to read through. The 'Darkness Flame' bit feels like an unnecessary rip off of the Amaterasu flames and it felt a bit too edgy for my tastes. Also, making Naruto's mom an Uchiha? Kind of defeats the point of his bloodline then. The reason he can hold the Kyuubi so well is because Uzumaki are Perfect Hosts. It's why his mom was able to live for as long as she did when the Kyuubi was extracted from her. But, I digress. Still hasn't gotten to the point of pushing me off of it yet, so I'm continuing onwards.

nice gilligans island reference

So, immediately, points deducted for Sakura bashing with making her secretly abusive towards Naruto on orders of the Civ Council and being tasked with killing him. I understand that not a lot of people like Sakura, believe me, I get it. But I personally do not approve of bashing in fics. It detracts from the story overall because the person who happens to be the victim of bashing is thrown so far from their actual character in canon that it's honestly not entertaining when they get their comeuppance. And it's less fun when they keep coming back.

my hulk enjoys your stories and honestly, so do I.

Hey!
I just finished reading your story "Hell Sharingan V2", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
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Hope to hear from you soon!

Hmm so the mission to retrieve Tsunade has begun I wonder how well that'll go anyways keep up the great work!

The story has gotten better and so far I'm liking where it's heading, we'll have to see where it goes from here.

The story has its cringe moments but it also haas has its good moments as well.

The story has grown on me so far. I'm gonna see where you take this

Really enjoying your story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

The part about it cheating is stupid. he's cheating to exercise his chakra. beanie Shinobi is all about cheating and getting the upper hand...