|Reviews for Hell Sharingan V2|
| christopherrhaydon chapter 17 . 8/13
Update ASAP AND IF I WAS A GHOST, THEN YES I WOULD.
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/8
Cousins reunited! Will they find out?
| avatoa chapter 5 . 7/9
That author's note at the end man.(sniff) I'd never thought I would find someone else that hates yaoi as much as I do. PERMISSION TO ENLIST, SIR! (Snaps a salute)
| Eien no henko chapter 17 . 7/4
When u updating
| LightningmasterRyu chapter 17 . 7/4
well this fanfic is great. i'm gonna follow it
| xXxnarusasuxXx chapter 17 . 7/3
| Sageofchaos chapter 17 . 6/23
hope to read more.
| Sir MIDNIGHT The Fallen One chapter 17 . 6/15
To start, I agree with not having a very action-packed chapter after the last one as too much action can be repetitive and boring after a while. Anyway, first off having Kyuubi unknowingly heal Naruto's scaring is okay I guess, but I kinda felt they were a defining trait to how he is now as he went through some things and came out of it slightly damaged but stronger for it. Not too mention his mask, though very cool looking and intimidating, was used to hide them(even though with how damaged it is now, it probably won't survive much longer). I did like how Naruto was correct when it came to the rules of the exam saying that there wasn't a rule for participants for destroying the fence during the exam. Anko having to get the rule book to look that up was funny. I think Kabuto covering his tracks and not leaving much evidence about him being a spy was a nice touch since if he did somehow expose himself before Orochimaru's plans took place, he wouldn't have been a very good spy. Ishikawa abusing his ghost powers was good for a chuckle as I would probably do the same. I also agree that Sasuke should have the ability to copy a jutsu similar to Kakashi, but maybe he doesn't do it as much in canon because Kakashi has more experience at doing so than Sasuke. I can only recall one time he did it, when he copied the beginning part of Lee's Shadow of the Dancing Leaf and even then it was incomplete, but turned it into his Lion's Barrage. The changes you made here, such as Lee getting his teammates before helping Team 7, Sasuke helping Karin more than he did originally were nice touches considering the events of the story. Sakura's character development was also very well done. Hopefully she will be able to do something about her bitch of a mother. Orochimaru seemingly interested in Naruto as well as Sasuke doesn't bode well. Hopefully the snake doesn't find out about Naruto's abilities(or maybe not as that would be a major obstacle for Naruto and provide good reading). All in all, good work on this chapter.
P.S I actually don't know what (3) was from, though it does sound familiar. Care to enlighten me?
| setokayba2n chapter 17 . 6/14
It's a surprise that Naruto is not in rage or a rogue, after everything that happened in chapter 13, not to say the "Stupid seal" that make him stupid and easy to control. He could very well go Nuke-Nin, kill those that hurt him, and then go to another village.
They try to do something in his mind? Just take out the seal of Kyubi and let him eat the Yamanaka.
What if he is chained? He is a ninja, and he could very well use Kyubi Chakra to get out.
Good work with the story
| Anonymous Fan chapter 2 . 6/11
Good chapter needs a bit more originality though I mean this is the new take on the story hell sharingan right so why are there so many similarities to the original version of this story not that It was bad or any thing I love your stories though from an avid speed readers standpoint you might want to make the chapters longer and more frequent other Wise we lose interest and forget about them I mean no offense but until the other day I thought you quit writing stories but I'm glad you didn't good on you man any who I always loved how thought out the you're stories are you have a plot and that helps bring the story together so thanks for writing and please continue to do so more often.
| Desultorynights chapter 11 . 6/13
...Naruto is kinda insane and schizophrenic...Like he has 4 voices in his head. Also the telepathy/telekinesis thing is too much
| Desultorynights chapter 4 . 6/13
Actually I accept your third eye as a trade for Haku romance
| Desultorynights chapter 3 . 6/13
Booooo third eye
| ssj3gohan007 chapter 17 . 6/12
Great story! I love it! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next!Isn't Karin an Uzumaki? I wonder if she and Naruto may realize that they may be related once they reveal their last names?
| PLEASE READ ME chapter 6 . 6/9
"it's a me Naruto!" get it Mario's catch phrase "dun da dun dun dunn da a dun da dooo do doo dooo do doo daaa do do" think Mario star power theme (or look it up on you tube)