|Reviews for History Won't Repeat Itself|
| Terror of the Great Sea chapter 7 . 5/23/2012
PLZ update! I know you're working on other (awesome) stories, but you haven't updated this on forever...I really love it. Alot.
| karusenshi chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
Oh farore, I really like your writing! There's a lot of humour but you know when to tone it down at very important parts. In fact, as I read this story on the bus with my phone, I smiled way too often and received many odd glances from my fellow passengers. I really hope you finish this soon, but take your time! It's understandable if you don't feel the same interest when writing this than when you first started. One day, maybe you'll get your Zelda muse back ;) Lovely story and I shall await the next chapter, no matter how long the wait! :D
| Amethyst 269 chapter 7 . 1/29/2011
Hi, I'm fairly new here, and I recently reviewed WaveBreeze's fanfic that you did also. I've actually read almost all of your stories, and I love them! I just wasn't a member yet, but now that I am (thanks to my friend - Archer94 - since she also became a member here), I'm happy to finally be able to keep up with stories like yours. So PLZ update soon! D
| Wavebreeze chapter 7 . 1/2/2011
Haha! I am super late but managed to review! :D SCORE! Sadly, it has been a while since I read this story and, frankly, I can barely remember anything that happened besides the major things...like that Ganondorf is evil...yeah.
Even though, I decided I would give a thorough review like I usually do so, in Phoenix Wright words (other video game reference) "TAKE THAT!"
Aannnyways, I have forgotten what your writing style is like. You can usually create an atmosphere with only one sentence, while I usually create freakishly long chunks of paragraphs just to try to make some suspense. I like - and am even envious - of how short yet perfectly you manage to write. Even though, this can be a problem when it comes to dialogue sometimes. There isn't much break between the Muratate and Link's talking so it's almost scriptish. Try imagining the scene in your head and you'll probably notice that the people talking aren't sitting completely still. Often people make gestures when talking so try incorporating them into dialogue. It keeps the reader interested and takes away the script feel.
i know it's been a while since I've reviewed, but have you forgotten my picky fetish for description? :p XD I can't remember if you've described it before, but I have no idea what the office looks like. It's inviting yet gloomy you say? Sounds like a paradox to me so it's best to explain it with some butt kicking description! :D That and Muratate because I totally forget who she is too. Maybe the bigger problem is my memory here, huh? Even though, she's returned from her travels so maybe she got a tan? XD
I'm not really sure what Link is so upset that Zelda and him have the Triforce. From the information he's given, I'd be pretty psyched if I were him. I mean, you get super awesome powers...SWEET! Perhaps you should mention what might cause his distaste for this news.
Link's usually a pretty cynical guy so I found his proposal of marriage and love speech kind of out of character. However, it was so adorable and makes me thirst for more zelink stuff! I feel inspired again and, just maybe, might even finish writing RNS by tomorrow just by reading that! (But don't count on that because I'll probably get distracted.) Even though it seemed a little strange, I was still swept away by how adorable it was!
Great chapter and I'm happy that you managed to update! Will you ever write Zelink stuff again (even oneshots)?
| Canada Cowboy chapter 7 . 12/3/2010
My first reation: WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?
Other than that, I like the revelations. Link holding the Triforce along with Zelda and Ganondorf sets the stage for a dramatic battle ahead. I thought you could have improved on making the atmosphere around the revealing of the Triforce be a bit more suspenseful. I mean, you're nothing more than a stable boy living in the new world, then suddenly you realize the fate of the world is in your hands. Shouldn't there be a bigger shock than a simple "Can you please get to the point?" So mind that next time you write.
Other than that, I still have a flurry of questions. Given that Zelda also knows about the power she has, what plans does she have to deal with it? Now that Link and Zelda are on their way to becoming a full-fledged couple, will they fight alongside each other from now on? We saw Link training with Sheik and Dark for a while before, but theoretically speaking they still have yet to pass their ninja exams, so when will they be tested? And darn it, when will they get their ninja uniforms?
Other than that, just don't give up on this story, okay?
| Maxwell the Murderer chapter 6 . 7/19/2010
Umm, I only have one thing to say. (Well, two things.)
1: I have discovered the pure awesomeness that is InuYasha. Well, not the character, (I'm not sorry for being a guy!) but the whole manga/anime itself is awesome. I'm only on the first episode of the second season. I found it for free through Hulu!
2: Not anything against you, but I will not read your Naruto fics. I love Naruto, but since I'm a guy, and all your stories are about a character I hate, unless you can somehow miraculously convinve me to like Deirdra, I shall not read them.
Anyways, don't worry about the updates. My other fav author is updating her story once a month. (Wow, I just realized how wrong that sounded.)
Zelda: IDIOT! *slaps*
Me: Ow! All I did was make a comment!
Link: Yeah, I mean, what'd he do wrong?
Zelda: God, you two are idiots.
Me: Link? Yes. Me? Possibly, but I don't think so.
Also, I gotta know, which one has been your favorite LOZ game? Mine was either TP or MM.
I know what you think about Midna, but I liked her. At least, I liked her more that I liked Tatl. Or Navi.
Tael tatl! (adamwestslapdog is awesome!)
MM, it was cause i just loved all the characters.
Anyways, that's all folks!
| shioppai chapter 6 . 7/13/2010
awww! im SUPER srry if ive evr dun that to u- i cant rlly remember. altho im prety sur ive don it to , only i think i sed 'iim gonna splode.' i dont care how long it takes to update! and RIP TO DED MOTIVATION! XC o noes! i personaly think ur a SUPER MEGA awesome writer, and i also think that not just 4, but al of ur stories r AMAZING!this chap is also awesom, and i RLLY enjoyd reading it! lol the part with zelda and link is sooo funny! i no its prolly sposed to b serious, but i still lold at links obliviousness, and also dark and sheiks! LINK MEGA OWNS GANON! XDDD im waching the random jumping off a cliff part at the end of the trailor-its SOOO amazing! wen i found out it was comin out in 2011, i was mega pissd. but watev its worth it! XDD
| shioppai chapter 5 . 7/13/2010
omg, i was like sooo super scared zelda was gonna die! and YAAY for first kinda real zelink! boo for magically induced fires that kill zelda this cahpter was AMAZINGLY good! even if it was just filler, it was super good filler! cant wait to read chaptr 6!
| shioppai chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
OMGGGGG BEST CLIFFIE EVARRRRRRR!THIS STORYS SSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOD! this chap was supr good!
| shioppai chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
OHMFGGGGGGGGGG! THIS CHAP WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! lubbed it! D': awwww! SO srry bout ur gramma!
| shioppai chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I AM SOOO IN LOVE W/ THIS STORY! its sooooo good!even tho ive only red the prologue, i totes love it! XDDDDDD!AWWW!POOR ZELLIE!i feel bad for her :'P
| winter snow723 chapter 6 . 6/29/2010
plese continue this story is very good
| The Zestiest Pepper Ever chapter 6 . 6/23/2010
wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! ure back! id say update but thatd make me feel guilty sooo... atualização ! sooooooonn
| Lady.Zayriah chapter 6 . 6/23/2010
Aw! Link and Zelda were so close! How adorable!
| Canada Cowboy chapter 6 . 6/22/2010
Well, I do have mixed feelings after reading this chapter. As you mentioned, there were issues to be dealt with regarding how you want to proceed with this story, and I did finish reading this chapter hoping for more. But after the hectic year that you said you've been having so far, I guess I'll have to let you off the hook. I do hope everything is going okay with your family right now, and that you'll all be in good health and spirits.
That being said, this chapter doesn't really get to the actual point of the story. I see a bit of training in the end, and the healing process between Link and Zelda (and the subsequent romance) is a bit of a surprise, but I don't see how Link can put the information he discovered regarding the coup into good use. While the points you offered are pretty good for a filler chapter, and probably for the best given how you claimed you struggled so hard to get it done, it was more helpful if you added more details into the events rather than talk about things in a general way.
Other than that, I think it's a good filler chapter, but nothing too much. I'm willing to help you with your next chapter if you want, but for sure you'll have to tell me a bit more than what you got here in other to help you. If you're willing to take up my offer, give me a shout and we'll see what we can work out. Other than that, I hope everything goes well, with both your family and your writing.