Awww I wish there was more tehe it was a fun story though

Oh god O_O I assume this gives a chance for the reno rude pairing? But wow Poor Gareth, I was actually starting to like him XD

Hmm, you know I have to say I'm actually in your boat right now / I'm writing this fanfic called rising apostle and people won't take the time to really review and it's frustrating when you put hours into a story and receive little to no feedback even if it is just a two second 'hey nice work keep it up'

Oh my god poor freaking Rude He tried so hard to be nice and understanding...God you make really convincing OC's for this and I like the drama XD I have one quick note though for you. On Reno...it seems like you went a bit heavy on his angsting with the whole 'wearing clothes in the shower' thing. Granted I understand being a Turk is defiantly hard O_o Just seemed a tad overdone with Reno. Aside from that I'm really enjoying this and devouring the chapters

Okay okay the your momma war was priceless XD I've been keeping up with this for a few chapters and I am in love...but uh oh...jealous Gareth who can get grabby That doesn't seem like it will end well...

ending was a bit dry but hey it's Reno and we love him no matter what XD

*cackles sadistically* hahahaaha u killed the lot, i don't know why but i'm grinning like a maniac *hands the author a box of chibi Loki chocolates* yes i know i'm fucked in the head

there is a reason i buy my thicker books in hard cover, they come so in handy when my siblings relationships go all pear shaped because someone was complete idiot

i'm so loving the Tseng aggravation, no matter what he does u eventually have to love Reno, this was so good it took me nine friggen chapters to unstick my peepers to comment

FAN!

I really enjoyed reading this, and I'm glad you finished it when you did. The story was gripping and exciting the whole way through and sometimes we make the mistake of continuing the story even when we're all out of good ideas and it can ruin it. But you got the ending bang on. I loved it :) xflightofthrphoenix

Normally i would only review a completed story when i finish the last chapter, but this chapter absolutely deserved a review - I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at 'your mum' jokes before but the ones you picked really tickled me!

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story and will review once again at the end!

xflightofthephoenix

I guess you wrote this story a long time ago and i don't know if you still read the reviews but if you do I want to say that, so far, this story has been one of the best I've ever read ans I'm serious. I almost cried in the end. It really is a great story and I love it (_ )

Aaaaand 31 chapters later (in one sitting) here's your review :)

Let me start by saying that you ended the story perfectly! I think anything more would have been too much, and it leaves a nice open-endedness that I can mull over for a while.

You're portrayal of a jealous boyfriend (Gareth) was so accurate it was freaky. I've had a boyfriend tell me before that he trusted me but not the people around me, etc. That part just sort of stuck with me.

The story was interesting, angsty, and still had really funny moments (I lol at Reno's pranks, especially the sugar). Was sad when Gareth died :(

I also really enjoy the way you make the characters interact!

Good job, and please keep writing Reno and Rude stories! (I'm reading Bite Marks, but I don't think I've reviewed, I've been horribly busy with school :( ).

Cheers!

~A

Second time reading this, sifted through pretty much all of the Reno and Rude completed romance stories to find it again. Loved it just as much, if not more, the second time around. Good piece a work ya got 'ere :)