Reviews for Surrender
RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
"Eyes wandering over my bared flesh, Edward heated me with the thick rolled erection in his jeans and the halogen flare of his meandering look."

"Languorous filling, fantastic flying out. Tenderly in. Excruciatingly out!"


Delicious poetic edge that is all you! Damn what a way to come home! ;) I'm off to pounce on the hubs after that HIGHLY inspirational read!

Delightful use of the skates. The swirl of images in the beginning conveyed on an instinctual level how she has suffered and attempted to cope in his absense. The surreal feel to her thinking lends a strong dream like quality. Powerful!

Thanks for writing, bb!
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