|Reviews for The Long Way Home|
| BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 5/8/2012
Her sitting in the car, alone, misplaced and remembering is so sad.
Sounds as if everyone knew about Rosalie/Edward's feelings for each other, wondering what could have happened. Had something to do with Rosalie's mother's accident too?
So many mysteries.
| BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
My heart bleeds for Rosalie. Not having all the information yet works really well to keep me wanting to know more.
Did Edward ever love Rosalie and like her, just felt it wasn't mutual, that they were "just good friends"...what happened to end the friendship? So many holes to fill in.
One thing is certain. Rosalie is lonely and hurting, and alone.
| BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Never thought I'd be into a Rosalie/Edward story, I think I was wrong. As suggested,I read the o/s you wrote which gave the flash forward to this and I really got sucked into Rosalie's feelings. Her character so far is already really well developed and I connected with
her emotions. It was nice reading this chapter and how it all got started. The kids voice was believable.
Can't wait to read more.
| XiaoFeng91 chapter 8 . 5/2/2012
I'm enjoying this sensation of having my heart broken.
| Chicklette chapter 24 . 1/1/2012
Oh, girl - this was simply beautiful, from top to bottom. Thank you so much. *hearts*
| lil hummingbird chapter 24 . 10/14/2011
I have never loved and hated a story so much, and i mean that in a good way. The emotion that comes with story is so powerful and it comes across so well. I don't think I have ever cried that much reading a story before. I've shed a few tears before but to actually cry, never. I hate to cry.I felt Rosalie's pain, when her heart ached, so did mine. I've had simialr feelings come up in real life and you did such a great job conveying that to the reader. This is my first Rose fic and I think it will be the only one I read because none of the will be as you for the opportunity to read such a wonderful story and share your talent.
| Daintress chapter 24 . 8/30/2011
I have enjoyed this story so much! Rosalie's is such a snarky POV, but tender in her thoughts most of the time. Very interesting to read, and you wrote it so well! Thank you for not mirroring the "My Best Friend's Wedding" plot. You had me worried about that at one point. Lol! Well done!
| MeIshAlice chapter 18 . 8/22/2011
YAY! yay! Yay! Yayayayaaaaay! I'm so happy they FINALLY kissed!
| lola-pops chapter 24 . 7/15/2011
I want to have better words, but dude...all I have to say is that you are amazing and I feel very fortunate to be able to read writing as stellar as this.
Thank you. And I mean that. Like, a lot.
| lola-pops chapter 7 . 7/15/2011
You make me so happy. You also make my heart hurt, but it hurts so good I ain't even mad atcha.
| lola-pops chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
I love you for this. For your heartbroken Rose and your beautiful words. I'm right there with her, feeling the blood drain from my face and my stomach twist. And you know that's how I roll. :)
| jmrbear chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I love your beginning. You have delivered classic early childhood interaction and infused it with warmth.
| fngrdust chapter 24 . 6/4/2011
You're MY ass.
"I remembered the brief conversation I'd overheard between Emmett and Bella on the back porch afterward, when she'd asked him if he wanted to say something to him. I hadn't known who she was talking about at the time, but now it was another piece falling into place, the realization that Bella had been talking about Edward, that she'd probably known about Emmett's feelings for me before they'd been confirmed to anyone else. There was a small part of me, instinctive and still deeply ingrained after years of resentment toward her, that felt a twinge in my chest, but it was fleeting. God knew he'd probably needed someone to confide in."
I miss these kids. I really do. You did so well with them and you made this crazypants wife crazyproud.
| fngrdust chapter 23 . 6/4/2011
So cute. So much love.
(Would write more but G is here and trying to stop me.)
| fngrdust chapter 22 . 6/4/2011
I love her parents.
And Em. Of course. Actually, I just love all of your characters and I need to just... wrap it up here.