Reviews for Snow Storm
Wonderland Tea Party chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
ShinoTen is really starting to become my new favorite crack pairing (almost, GaaHina is still #1). I really hope you make a sequal to this, I'd really love to know if they tell the others about their relationship right away or keep it secret for a while. Really loved this! 3
Barby Hyuga chapter 3 . 2/23/2014
Loved it! too bad you don't have more of this pairing they're great together and I loved the way you wrote it! :)
Yolusa chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
real smooth, shino
Yolusa chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
wow...great chapter
Yolusa chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
aww it's so cute how he's so sweet on her
i love it!
DeenaTweety chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
Aw... I know this was written years ago but in case you still read reviews, I just wanted you to know that I looooved this story! I thought I'd read just about all the Shino/Ten fics on here but just today I realized that I'd somehow missed this one. And I am so glad I read it!

Shino was so passionate and I loved how you portrayed Tenten. This turned out to be one of the best I've read!

Well done, and I hope you keep writing!
Beloved Daughter chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Loved this story with its rare pairing! Thanks for writing and posting! :)
Skyrere chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
heheh... I love Shino. and he fits so well with tenten.
Animefangirl95 chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
Awesome job:)
Animefangirl95 chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Dang Shino sounds hot
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Haha poor Shino... I hate monkeys they are creepy!
notmenotinotyou chapter 3 . 4/26/2012
I really liked this story, it was well paced and flowed nicely. there really isn't enough of this pairing on i hope you continue to write.

Again loved this.
Barunka chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
It was breathtaking. It's not very usual to find story with fav pairing, interesting plot, nice ideas, beautiful words, fav characters (who are actually IN character), story which is funny and serious at the same time, to find an author who knows how to use words perfectly so they are vibrating inside my head and who knows how to work with characters. I like Shino, I love him deeply to be honest, and he was as reserved, intelligent, loyal (and freaking damn gorgeous) as he really is plus some great shades of personality and mind which I appreciate when an author adds and they really fit to his standards. Tenten was great, and her "bad past with Neji" (or how should I put it, hmm? *thinks hardly*) was interesting, it gave us the reason for her hesitation, even though she's very energic and direct. She wasn't very girly, though. Just woman. With crush. Just someone I could believe, someone I could feel sympathy with. I hope you'll write more awesome, marvellous fics with those two, because they really deserve it. It's an amazing pairing (oh, I love nearly every pairing with Shino, especially yaoi pairings, but Tenten is one of my bestEST favs). And I have to add that I love the way you describe (well, mention, but you know what I mean) Kiba :) And.. excuse, please, all stupid mistakes in this comment, I come from foreign country *sheepishly*
ReflectedGrace chapter 3 . 8/18/2011

I LOVE how character-driven this is, how sweet and slightly spicy the romance is and how non-explicit it was! The respectful distance and mentions of awkwardness during "the scene" was realistic and much more literary than a character set-up, followed by the scene with all the bodily descriptions of a lemon. For me, the way you wrote this kept it all squarely on the level of a satisfying, romantic story which goes from beginning to end, w/o simply being an excuse for porn between certain characters.

I felt a real connection between Tenten and Shino through the first chapter, and I LOVED how you showed the needs in both which led them to each other...

I liked your Tenten, who is chatty and bubbly and strong, and not the harsh, demanding person that she can be portrayed as. LOVED the backstory w/Neji, and how that affected her, also how Gai and Lee and Neji wouldn't take care of her (which was good for her training, but she lacked the warm heart tat Shino provides...)

I thought you wrote exceedingly weel from both perspectives, Shino and Tenten's, giving us a believable insight into both of their characters...

Well done! I truly, truly enjoyed it and hope to go read more of your writing now!
RemoveDeleteKill Account chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
"So, here he was, a beautiful woman in his arms, vulnerable and available, and all he could do was sniff her hair."

That has got to be my favourite line. :) Lovely job.
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