|Reviews for Breaking Dawn: The Alternate Ending|
| caroline.lee.79025 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
That hurt my soul
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
| Celestial Rainstorm chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
Man, I know how you feel. I hope you will be okay. My baby Raven, Black lab of ten years, passed away. I miss her so much.
| Celestial Rainstorm chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
LOL The end?
| davestridersjunk chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
I can't be any more sorry to hear about your cat! I had to go through the exact same thing, but with my dog. I won't say "I'm sorry" because I know that it might make no difference, but my thoughts are with you and I really hope that things get better quickly. All my love. :)
| unknown chapter 3 . 9/10/2010
that's just so sad. I had a similar thing happen to me when I was younger.
my cat, smokey, got really sick but we don't live near a vet. I don't know what happened but we found out he couldn't walk. he could move his legs but couldn't stand up. he died the next day.
| davestridersjunk chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I thought it was more funny than sad!
It would be so gutting if this actually happened though. :]
| JackieJay chapter 2 . 4/30/2010
ya i think you should continue
| RemytheWriter chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I think the only part that seems kinda depressing is the last line. "And now my life would be a nightmare." I like the idea though; pretty cool, dude. ]]
| kaylinwriter14 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I don't really care for all those "It was only a dream" things so I was a bit disappointing with this.
That would be sad, to have the best dream EVER and then wake up D:
| LittleHyperBox chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
When I saw the title of your story, I thought it would be one of those where Bella, Edward etc. die when fighting the Volturi. I was surprised when I saw the length, but I thought it was really impressive. A little one-shot is cool sometimes and you created the perfect one.
I hope I'm not asking too much but could you please continue with the story?
| Jaq's-Out-Punching-Werewolves chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
so are you continuing it? i hope so.
if so, you should have bella try and change the events that happen in the books, resulting in different struggles and conflicting events
| Edward's Doll chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
omgg ! update soon!
| twilight addict chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
well ok then
| Xxheartbroken54xX chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
u should start the story like normal on chap2 *if there is 1* but bella sees the ccullens and acts diffrent tring to see y the story didnt happen and add a whole set of diffent events
like bella saw how the futaure could be *exeept she hasnt met the cullens yet Do u get wat im sayin?*