|Reviews for UGILF|
| jbadillodavila chapter 14 . 11/5
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/4
Why the fuck was naruto so nervous
| Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 4 . 5/20
and now you have proven me right. you are clearly reusing much of the text. many of the scenes were IDENTICAL to the previous chapter. just with Tifa's name swapped with Hakufu's. very amateurish move. don't reuse text like that, you should always try and be at least slightly creative and write new text for every chapter, not just copy and paste while swapping names. it tends to annoy your readers, a lot.
| Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 3 . 5/20
... what the hell? did you cut and paste this together? one minute he's banging her doggy style, the next shes yanking his pants off? his pants were already off. then theres the difference in writing styles present. the first half was very well written and had a nice mix of the sensual romantic aspect, and just the right amount of eroticism. the other half read like a cheesy porno. no offence dude, but the more of these chapters I read, the more im beginning doubt you wrote this. either that or you did in fact write it, but are using scenes you wrote previously and as I said are copying pieces of them and slapping them together.
honestly I hope the next chapters prove me wrong, I really want to be wrong in this case. because if im right, ill have no choice but to report the story, I really, really, REALLY don't want to do that. because honestly ive read some of you other stories, I liked them they were well written. this however... I honestly have nothing I can say that I haven't already.
| phantom daniel chapter 6 . 4/26
Reused scene from the marvel one with summers
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/8
Dc girl supergirl
| Stone Shield chapter 15 . 3/25
I'd think the Beware the Batman's Magpie and her double personalities would be an interesting tale.
| Sasuke chapter 7 . 3/13
i love naruto
| Mikaeru346 chapter 16 . 2/2
What about Leone from akame ga kill, she and Naruto will be wild on each other and...bed. Peace. Favourite
| Mikaeru346 chapter 15 . 2/2
That's was a lot... Bravo
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/26
Here is a Steamy Lemon i Want you to read. Read the the Story called Hope's New World. A Final fantasy 13 fanfic. Read Chapter 11 and you will know what i'am talking about.
| corywolfz chapter 16 . 1/4
Good stuff update soon
| jake chapter 14 . 11/16/2014
kaguya was not human she was incarnation of shinju's will and vice versa and her sons were probably made by her chakra by creation of all things like the tailed beast the prospect of her being a human priestess came from black zetsu tempering with the uchiha tablet that is why to seal juubi she was sealed as well so technically she has never been with a man in her life hence being a virgin herself.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/25/2014
Wow great chapter,i love the ending XD.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/22/2014
Brah you should do revy,balalaika, and eda from black lagoon then do ameyuri ringo, pakura, from Naruto then do Annie leonhart, mikasa from attack on titan then fasha from dragon ball z.