Reviews for A Dream
Deby Magid chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
to bad it was only a one shot, dam, I wanted more
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Whoo hoo! lol Poor Harry thinking it was all a dream. Hm, wonder what he's gonna do now that he knows it wasn't? Can't wait to find out. _ will be waiting.
The Juice chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Ah!

'Tom my knickers are too tight Riddle'
123-321 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
lol awesome
themrs chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Definitely a short one but really cute!
Basill chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
That was sweet!
Wishing Well's Remorse chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
My, my am I the first review?

I must say that your story was wonderful, and simple while to the point.

Several warnings:

Your dialogue is a little bit sketchy. It might be better to make it either more direct, or use more punctuation. Commas seem to be lacking.

Snape (while adorably so) is a tad OOC. Though I (read this carefully) *do not suggest you change it* it might be easy to ward off terrible comments like this one by putting in a simple after note explaining that you twisted this character a tad to fit the plot of the story.

I do love this, though, despite all of what I just said, because it's a simply marvelous piece. So, I'm adding it to my favorites to prove that *I really like it*. I'm just picky about those things. Sigh.

-Zeph
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