|Reviews for A Dream|
| themrs chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Definitely a short one but really cute!
| Basill chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
That was sweet!
| Wishing Well's Remorse chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
My, my am I the first review?
I must say that your story was wonderful, and simple while to the point.
Your dialogue is a little bit sketchy. It might be better to make it either more direct, or use more punctuation. Commas seem to be lacking.
Snape (while adorably so) is a tad OOC. Though I (read this carefully) *do not suggest you change it* it might be easy to ward off terrible comments like this one by putting in a simple after note explaining that you twisted this character a tad to fit the plot of the story.
I do love this, though, despite all of what I just said, because it's a simply marvelous piece. So, I'm adding it to my favorites to prove that *I really like it*. I'm just picky about those things. Sigh.