Reviews for Forgiven Sin
Cpl.Hicks chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
I'm sad this hasn't gotten any reviews. :( It sucks that all the good PE stories here get so little to no attention at all. Still, I definitely love where you're going with this. Normally when people write OC characters in first perspective it gets a bit Mary-Suish/Gary-Suish. This definitely isn't one of those stories! This OC sounds very geniune and intriguing. His backstory, already, is cool. I hope you continue this someday. *_*