|Reviews for Long Time, No Kiss|
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/13
slow moving. mixed up your tenses in last part. Matt was talking in 1st person and then u switched 2 your pov.
| LittleRed525 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Just so everyone knows, this is my old account which the password was lost. I'm not sure if I'll continue this story or not. My new account is at thedaviniarose
Sorry for any inconvenience!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
You are writing more right?
| Master Gaga chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Ok...Stefan can not be evil..
| Master Gaga chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
I'm in love with the story, but wished they would get together already! LOL.
| Master Gaga chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
Can't wait to see what happens next :)
| Master Gaga chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
I think this pairing needs more stories. I was thinking of writing one, and then found yours. This first chapter was written beautifully. I loved it.
| Anonymous chapter 5 . 3/29/2011
I read the story thus far.
A few things I noticed:
The Rae character seems insecure and unrealistic. She's a very static character, even for a side character. I also noticed that she bites her lip excessively.
Her sister is worse.
The allusions to the past-the Italian Renaissance-and homosexuality are... Well, Leonardo da Vinci is thought to have been homosexual, yet was accepted as a great artist. Understand?
Stefan was a higher class citizen, however I doubt that he would have been punished for being homosexual.
Lastly, the plot twist was melodramatic. Rae and Stefan leave because he appeared ill at her doorstep late at night. That's mysterious and acceptable. However, the two are serendipitously discovered by an agent and cast in a "major" movie. Uh... what? Where are you going with this?
As far as the writing itself, the spelling and grammar do need improvement. And to be blunt, the dialogue is boring.
| Meel Jacques chapter 4 . 9/22/2010
| primavera15 chapter 4 . 6/21/2010
you got me wondering all right! I wonder is if this has to anything with making matt jealous or something...idk that was the first thing that came to mind XD it was a nice chapter! please update soon! :)
| lovelikeasalvatore'x chapter 3 . 5/27/2010
I thought i was the only one who liked Matt & Stefan as a couple!
| qpritchie1 chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
Great story! I really do hope you update soon; not many Stefan/Matt stories, so I was glad to come across yours. _
| FutureMrs.JasperHale chapter 3 . 2/27/2010
I like this story. Write more soon.
| FutureMrs.JasperHale chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
I would like to point out that they are in Virginia. Not West Virginia.
| primavera15 chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
yay! stefan loves him too! awesomness! update soon please!