|Reviews for The Time Machine|
| Irrelevant chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
Neat, like the plot and characters but the writing skill isn't exactly amazing, however anything i made would be way worse, nice job. I think the main problem is that things skip around a bit and aren't really too cohesive but what do I know, kewl.
| An Echo In Time chapter 3 . 6/24/2011
Cool idea. You still writing it? Cuz I'd love to read the next chapter.
| Xenophobic chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
i like it :D
| Kevin chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
how long since you last made this chapter, eh? and by the way, 2804 is a time period BEFORE 3036. and at the end, you said that her time was AFTER kantas, and that her weapons were better, and red hot chilli peppers are still making music in 2804, wich some how by your logic is AFTER 3036?
| lazy-gurl chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
hehe i like this and u are rite there arnt any fic here of DP i know its been along time since you last updated but please dont drop this story
| LoneWolf chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Sadly desert punk doesn't have many stories up here. This one could be pretty good. Hope will see more...
| luvyou123 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Hilarious update soon!