|Reviews for The Secret Garden|
| MyRedvines chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
| vausesandspanishharlem chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
| CharliDenae chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Awwww! What a sweet story. Alice and Jasper are so frickin' cute together! Even as children, they are meant to be, and Jasper will always protect his Alice.
| ingrid44 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Awwww. Sweet. Wonder who won the contest. Ever thought of another chapter, about Alice being taken away and evemtaully losing her memory?
| TurningANewPage chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was amazing. I'm not lying. You should be a professional writer. AWWWW I cannot get over how cute that was!
| breathless tomb chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I adored this.
It brought me to near tears.
Alice was so sad and defenceless.
I fell in love with Jasper all over again.
They really are my favourite couple:)
I mean, I love Bella and Edward,
But Alice and Jasper have so much more depth to their relationship.
It was lovely,
| paranoia'SPLASH chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
You have to expand this. You have to have to have to. :D
| The Kid Contest chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Very amazing oneshot!
Your story has been validated and accepted into The Kid Contest.
| KodaCullen chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
| luckyj525 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
all right, usually I avoid reading children stories, but I had to try this one since you wrote it.
and I loved it! it's just so CUTE!
the way they spoke and thought, it really seemed like they were children. SO adorable. great job!
| Taylahbob chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Naw! This is soo adorable! I loved it! Awesome job :D
| twilightobsessed160995 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
AW that was so sweet!
| Lady Saruman chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Ah, there we go! I was wondering when this story would ever show up, 'cause it took the longest time ever. :P
So yeah. The part about corporal punishment... that made me flinch. It's just not right, no matter what century we're in. -_-x
I also really love this quote:
"What he didn’t say was that he respected the girl for sleeping alone outside every night. He could do it, of course, but he was a man."
Hehehhe Jasper tries to be all macho. :) Of course, it just backs up everything we always talk about regarding men... *snickers*
My heart still aches at the idea that Alice sleeps outside in the garden. But it's a good thing it's summer. Actually you know what, I'd sleep outside. xD But she's such a young girl.
Mr. and Mrs. Brandon should be sent to an asylum... xD