|Reviews for the mandroid way he moved|
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
I'm so glad she found them :0)
Oh and I have those knees...it's just as crappy as you describe it.
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
You can write some dark fic. Freezing and homeless with the Impala stolen is an all too possible future. The boys live WAY to close to the edge. I'm glad you wrote them back into the car.
| NeverLookAway chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I loved it, simply and utterly loved it.
| Mirrordance chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I absolutely, absolutely adore you for this story. It's subtle but very rich at the same time, but what really grabs at me and sticks with me long after reading it is your skillful hand at the depiction of an almost casual, creeping despair. I don't think it's just with this fic in particular, but your writing is generally very atmospheric. Excellent, excellent job :)
| PADavis chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Loved this - the stark poverty was so sudden. Loved where they went looking for heat, and the rumble of the Impala and their reaction. Beautifully done.
| Maz101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Nicely done - that tone of weary resignation at what they have to deal with as each new possibility is dashed. A funny/ sad situation and nice flashes of the humour of Winchester brotherly dialogue.
| pandora jazz chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I liked your story.
It was an interesting idea, showing how close the brothers are to being homeless without the Impala and any funds in their pockets.
You did a great job writing the brothers in their AU, even though you warned us Dean had arthritis, I didn't realize you meant it until I read the story.
Great job describing the scenes of snow and cold that Dean and Sam were experiencing as they wandered the streets.
Nice ending. The Impala found them.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
| Onari chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Wow, that was...Great. I honestly didn't expect this kind of story (I'll try to read more into this verse), so...is dark the word? It feels more like "desolation", but don't mind a non-native like me. Anyway, the setting was so accurate and powerful that I could feel the cold. The snow. The silence. And the boys thrown into it, lost within it when they lose they home. It was agonic how everything they tried went wrong, even if it felt like inexorable on every step.
When they huddled together and started to laugh silly was just sad and perfect.
Thanks for sharin!
| jensengirl4eva chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Great story with just the right amount of brotherly love.
| shesamonster chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
"Sammy. We don't have too many options, here. You're gonna have to sell your ass."
I think I love you.
| K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
That was a really neat fic. Had an oddly O. Henry feel to it. You don't realize how close they are to the edge of destitution until you read something like that. I loved both the idea and the matter-of-fact delivery.
| primadonna cat chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
that was a cool story that I really enjoyed. Good brotherly love there, and given it's just that cold where I live, I can totally sympathize
| Amberdreams chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I liked the exploration of Dean and Sam without their home but couldn't really see why you have introduced the arthritis element (but I haven't read any of your other stories so maybe missing something)
| Justme chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Another good one!.
I thought for a second that you were going to let my dream of Sam and Dean winning the lottery come true.
I mean these poor can't even win 40 stinking quarters!.They are so cursed!.
I'm glad they were reunited with the Impala at the end.
Now they can be warm-well a bit warmer-and dry.
At least the wind is off their backs.
Be it ever so humble there's no place like home.
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I've spent some time this morning tippytoeing thru your tulips. I apologize for the fact that am only sending this one review to emcompass what was a very enjoyable trip. Your stories are great, especially the hurt Dean ones as they are my favorite kind, I'm into chronic as well. But I wanted to at least drop a note and say how much I liked them. I don't crawl out of my hole much anymore but I do stick out an antennae from time to time and feel around. I especially liked this one.