Reviews for Outcast's Alley |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Batard , Martinez, drôle de nom quand même ils font la paire... l'auteur a de drôle d'idées quand même |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sad you discontinued the series |
![]() ![]() ![]() draco needs to learn manners and how to at least try to make a proper apology esp since he at least should know better unlike harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() yea umbridge is so screwed and now harry is gunna actually reveal where he is just what the ministry official has done XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() im pretty sure umbitch is gunna take issue with his ppl status |
![]() ![]() ![]() and he is since harry could have easily gotten a job at Harlot's b4 meeting Mo and no1 would have batted an eye over his being fae |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah poor harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so cool, is he like an incubus or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to be so sad when I get to the end of this. It's so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() nope, sorry. kids suck. If you ever decide to rewrite this just drop the whole thing with the kid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() also. basilisk venom had that whole anti magic ability or whatever, would have certainly been forcefully stopped when he got bit |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's good, but kinda hollow. the whole lily cheated on James thing kinda sucks. if you pulled the "James was unable to have kids and got a friend to do it for him, or maybe he did a ritual to summon the devil to get her pregnant" or something similar would maybe work better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely to reread. Couldn’t help myself from coming back to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved reading this. Super original and fun, I'd love to read more, I was sad to see the next one isn't finished. This truly was beautiful. |