Reviews for Outcast's Alley
thunderofdeath97 chapter 2 . 4/23/2021
i sincerely hope snape isn't his father
Guest chapter 16 . 3/28/2021
I wish he used no’s last name as his instead of bastard as his last name. I also wish he got to know the queen and king before going to hogwarts. I would have made his get the letter from his mom the first day he was at the Dursley’s and than gave him take the potion to undo the glamour m. Gave him go through the changes than and have him do all the same but instead of finding snape have someone find him snd take them to the queen and he can learn before going to Sirius house got a day or two or a week or two and than go to hogwarts. Have a legal and magical name change so he’s not lying. Have most things stay the same but with some knowledge on what to do and someone to help watch his daughter he’d need to get to know them and trust them. I find his dislike of the queen to be to string. I mean it seems like he hates her more than snape snd the Dursley’s but why. I’m also confused because Malfoy is a death eater so why would he be an ambassador if he’s voldy right hand or are you making him a spy like snape. More chapters please
SilverMidas chapter 16 . 3/8/2021
Awesome story
alori.arto chapter 7 . 2/23/2021
Snape? adios
2rubs4u chapter 1 . 2/8/2021
Dam got the disgusting lily cheating on james with snape stuck on head, if you dont like that kind of thing this fic is not for you.
jcizzle98 chapter 10 . 1/16/2021
I honestly have to say I really dislike how he's avoiding his people and actually went to fucking snape for help he should have just went to harlot at the beginning I think he shouldn't have trusted dumbledore or the order at all I hope he will goto his people and stay there and get used to his responsibilitys and being a heir but well he's already a heir to Potter though he doesn't know how important that is idk how your thinking of him like that so I can't say that oh well I just hope he goes to his people and ignore voldemort and the profecy but not his destiny to his people
LightningFuryStrike13 chapter 2 . 12/24/2020
Yes chocolate for all that ails you
LightningFuryStrike13 chapter 1 . 12/24/2020
Really? No well what am I then?
gginsc chapter 12 . 12/9/2020
Harry really is stupid! Why can't the boy just keep his mouth shut?
jebcekkek chapter 2 . 10/21/2020
your husband fightin in war(for you too)and you cheate him wis creature another race...whore
Rairi Valelira chapter 11 . 10/20/2020
Harry is a stubborn and selfish prick... it is really starting to piss me off now. Just let anyone else suffer as long as what he wants is cared for.

It isnt even happiness he wants. From the way its written it is obvious its just control he cares for. Its setting him up to be a right bastard... no pun intended...
Rairi Valelira chapter 3 . 10/20/2020
Oh.. I shoulda seen that coming at the end
Rairi Valelira chapter 2 . 10/20/2020
Praise to chocolate
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13/2020
Yes, he should get a tattoo of a big big lightning bult on the back of his hand.
MattBlack chapter 7 . 9/9/2020
Who obliviated Harry about St Mungos? He KNOWS that's where Lockhart is...
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