Reviews for BondedPair: Fake Prophecy
The Frau chapter 3 . 9/1 have the bones of a good story, but your spelling is atrocious! I would definitely suggest the use of spellcheck and a good dictionary!
BlackVeilBride chapter 8 . 8/25
I hate the end... it made me cry. I don't like stories ending like that! But it was a REALLY good story.
Paz chapter 8 . 6/28
Most wonderful fic ever
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
Is he going to have Dada classes
jamie.lauria.79 chapter 8 . 6/5
A cute story with a nice ending.
Rose chapter 8 . 5/3
Crying alot at the end
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30
The clothes remind me of Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader,
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30
Sorry did not read summery properly, but i still stand with harry potter being OOC a little.
Nartria Eagle chapter 1 . 4/30
Kind of OOC with Voldemort and harry potter,but I will excuse it because I consider this an alternative universe.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/4
i am crying why did they have to die they could have been immortal! are u a sadist?
Shelby-The-Red-Mew chapter 8 . 1/12
This was a... oí I can't even find the right words it's just perfect and awesome and great and yaaaaaaay! sad to see it's done but the ending was soooooo great/perfect that I'm not that sad... GREAT JOB!

no one chapter 8 . 12/2/2015
It was a good story however, you really need to correct spelling
Femalefan chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
I forgot to mention in my previous post is that when another character speaks it should be on another line e.g
"speech" char A
"talking" char B
Femalefan chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
This could be a good story but your grammar and spelling need worked on.
MyFluffleFix chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
"WHAT! We must save him!"
Pfft. I almost died laughing at that. I swear to god. Ooc is right because the way I imagined it was so bizarre. I'm enjoying it thus far. :D
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