|Reviews for Better is Worse|
| watlocked chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
The story flows fine in my opinion. You captured his emotions quite perfectly, though I have no personal experience to compare them with. Very well done.
I think there were a few spelling errors, but I'm not entirely sure - skimming over it again I don't see any, so it might just've been my eyes.
| shallowness chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Powerful idea, well executed, good to read about the events of TBA from such a strong, but different, perspective to the one offered in canon (and fanon, as the interest has always been in Alec's reaction mainly.) I liked the way then you had Alec's reaction seep in and throw Berrisford too.
There's a good build up to the piece with the repertition of phrases, unity to each block and a development via the blocks. (Interesing to read if after having read "Soldiers Should" actually, they make fascinating compnion pieces.)
Small quibble, i wouldn't describe Rachel as a woman, would Robert do so?
| GalitMirav chapter 1 . 1/30/2002
Wow. This was well written. Keep up the good work.
| leelee chapter 1 . 1/27/2002
| Dusty chapter 1 . 1/22/2002
I didn't think this was too disjointed. It was pretty eloquent, actually. Nice insight into Mr. Berrisford. Rock on!