Reviews for The Fall of Our Kingdom
Spirit of Roses chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Wow, this is very powerful, and beautifully written. It certainly shows how love can turn sour once jealousy consumes somebody. This was an awesome read. Thank you so much for sharing!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Allusions Blossom is correct
Crashing Into the Sea chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Amazing story!
queerpinata chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Wow, that was a really beautiful fan-fic! I actually managed to get a bit emotional towards the end. You're a fantastic writer, and I admire you for managing to write one of these "thought-fic" sort of stories, I know that I find it difficult to write them. Great work!
Saemi67 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Wow, that was really unexpected ! It's really well written, I like it very much. I never thought of Hoffman abusing Wendy and Stray Dog being killed by her, it is really an interesting plot ! Poor children... but in this case, what happened to Wendy then ?