|Reviews for Mia Bear|
| Angel JJK chapter 41 . 7/4/2011
Awww, sad with the war, sweet graduation and proposal! Please continue!
| RedsAttic chapter 38 . 6/14/2011
I look forward to reading future chapters...
| notwritten chapter 38 . 6/5/2011
That was good. Keep smiling. :-)
| Angel JJK chapter 38 . 6/4/2011
Cool! Please continue!
| vampirefairy09 chapter 37 . 5/26/2011
Totally awesome, please write more soon. Love it.
| aschmieman chapter 37 . 5/16/2011
Great story! I really hope that you update it soon. I can't wait to see where it heads next. Happy writing! :)
| Angel JJK chapter 37 . 4/27/2011
Love it! Look forward to more!
| notwritten chapter 37 . 4/26/2011
That was nice. Keep smiling. :-)
| RedsAttic chapter 36 . 3/29/2011
I look forward to future chapters...
| kashi.kali chapter 36 . 3/8/2011
LOVED IT! PLS pls update soon...great story...cant wait to read the next chapter. THANX
| Soap15 chapter 36 . 2/25/2011
wow this is really good i cant wait for the update
| Angel-Of-Death-136 chapter 36 . 2/18/2011
Wow Love the whole story so far carry on soon _
| notwritten chapter 36 . 2/17/2011
I enjoyed this. Keep smiling. :-)
| Puppyluv09 chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
I appreciate your review but this story took a lot for me to do, I don't usually take ideas from others so this was something new for me. I have no problem being told when my grammar is off, it actually helps. However, the comment at the end I feel was uncalled for, this story has a lot of positive reviews so, while you can have your own opinion, you don't have to rip on the story.
And yes this story is verbatim of the fifth movie, outside of the Seventh movie, it is my favorite and I have seen it many times, and I have actually run out two DVD's. The Point of the AU was because every Harry Potter fan KNOWS that Hermione isn't actually a Malfoy.
Also, maybe you should check your facts, 1) Malfoy was turned in the fourth book and this story takes place in the fifth- seventh year books!
Again thanks for the review,
| PlayingFair chapter 36 . 2/17/2011
To Keepingitreal: I've heard of critics in my time, but at least they had enough guts and dignity to at least put a name to their slander. So Keepingitreal, while you might be entitled to your opinion on the matter of "good content", unless you are ballsy enough to show your work it's probably best for all parties involved that you keep your opinions to yourself. It takes a lot of guts to write and PUBLISH their work on a site like this. If you hated the story that's great for you, stop reading and keep your flames to yourself! In regards to your comments about grammar: 1) It's not published professionally hence why it's on . 2) While there are grammatical errors dispersed throughout the piece they are not sop distracting that they take away from to over all story. 3) Only grammar Nazi's care that much about the mechanics of a piece; which is why they don't write story they write publication for English journals where their other snobby friends can congratulate themselves on the mastery of an ever changing language. In conclusion: No one cares if you hated the story but you should extend more discretion when reviewing. (If you're still confused, read the tag that is below the comment box)