|Reviews for Mia Bear|
| Keepingitreal chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
So many errors! Apparently the author doesn't know or care about the difference between fallow/follow along w/several others. (no a days instead of nowadays) Nor does she know the story line itself. Ginny refers to Draco as 'ferret boy malfoy' BEFORE he was ever turned into a ferret. As for the story itself it's choppy. It doesn't have a smooth transition from one scene to the next and we're supposed to just keep up and guess at what's going on. By ch 7 there is also several scenes practically verbatim from book 5. I'm highly disappointed. I obviously didn't go far enough back in reviews since the ones I read were good and yet the story is lacking.
Read at the risk of suffering decent grammar, spelling and style.
| RedsAttic chapter 35 . 2/12/2011
| notwritten chapter 35 . 2/12/2011
This was really interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)
| CeliaEquus chapter 34 . 1/24/2011
*Frowns* Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear...
| notwritten chapter 34 . 1/19/2011
I like this very much. Keep smiling. :-)
| Angel JJK chapter 34 . 1/19/2011
Uh oh! Whats gonna happened next! Please continue!
| gemini rose chapter 33 . 1/14/2011
OMG ma fav story x u so hav 2 update x so wat happens between mione n snape? love this story so much x
| xCHARLIExPEACHx chapter 33 . 1/13/2011
This is great! I can't wait for an update! Keep em comin! :)
| Mia Leonor chapter 33 . 1/12/2011
Oh, why George and Hermione had to break up? . It is so sad! . I want for happiness for Hermione, please. She has already suffered enough, don't you think?
You fic is wonderful!
| notwritten chapter 33 . 1/11/2011
I like this. Keep smiling. :-)
| Susan dogwoodfarmverizon.net chapter 32 . 1/7/2011
Outstanding story! I have really been enjoying your family set up. I have read several stories where Hermione is a malfoy and this one is great.
| notwritten chapter 32 . 1/3/2011
This was good. Keep smiling. :-)
| noirmatin chapter 32 . 1/1/2011
OMG ! I have been strech reading your fanfic and it is AMAZING ! You are really good at writing, I think I never have read a fanfic that is so well-written !
Is their a Hermione/Severus pairing? I hope so... :D
| Amy chapter 32 . 1/1/2011
I love this story its kickass write more
| Mia Leonor chapter 32 . 1/1/2011
Ok, you just made me cry like a babe with this chapter .
Poor Hermione... .
I can't wait for the next one.