Reviews for Naruto, the next Shinigami Shinobi Meister
Natsubi chapter 4 . 11/9
damnit, you ruined this with that hinata shit, fuck you, unless you plan to kill hinata within the next chapter, im done with this shit, i could write a literal essay about why that pairing is terrible
Monster King chapter 18 . 8/14
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.
PLEASE READ ME chapter 10 . 2/24
( ) should only be used if you are addressing the reader.
Dragonman109 chapter 18 . 10/21/2016
I look forward to reading the next chapter soon as it's ready.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/17/2016
je veux la suite de naruto,la prochaine shinigami shinobi meister
christopherrhaydon chapter 18 . 9/2/2016
kat1017 chapter 5 . 5/4/2016
Tsubaki has called Lord death in the series, remember black star was her Meister so she had to be the responsible on in her team/partnership with him.
DragonBuster117 chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
I love this story so far, but you had Naruto fight Dosu. I thought that you had that whole team killed?
Fernando overkill chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
Guest chapter 18 . 4/21/2016
Your writing style is really bad you keep interrupting the chapters and are skipping parts of the story all together the plot idea is good but the execution needs a lot of are plot holes all over the story my suggestion would be to rewrite the story and take your time doing so to make it perfect
DragonBuster117 chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
The idea seems like a good one for a story and especially good for a crossover; however, your grammar has a lot of room to improve. For starters, you put multiple speakers in one paragraph when there should be a new paragraph for every time the speaker changes. Secondly, your writing seems too fast paced. This chapter should have been at least twice as long if written correctly. I'm sorry if you have already changed this for later chapters, but if you have, you should consider editing this chapter. The first chapter gives the reader an impression of your work, much like when you met a new person you judge them, even if you don't mean to, by their appearance. If the summary doesn't draw the reader to the first chapter, and/or the first chapter casts a bad light on the story and may keep the reader(s) from reading the rest of the story. I just wanted to give some parting advice, even if you don't see this.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/20/2016
heh heh, the old "I'll do anything", works every time. Especially with ninja fangirls.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/20/2016
Now THAT'S how you get a point across in a ninja village. WITH EXTREME PREJUDICE! Cause damn, those people are too stupid to get it another way.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2015
The scarecrow
Bloodzone15 chapter 4 . 11/18/2015
No anything but a Walter fart.
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