Reviews for But a Shadow
yamina-chan chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
It's sad, but a nice story. I enjoyed reading it a lot and I like how you displayed them.
Yvi-sama chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This is good. A little confusing but good.

I liked the way they used their tails to comfort and tease each other .
Leife chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Wow... I must admit that the story started out a little rough for me, but it evened out toward the end. Kuja's end always makes me pretty sad, because just when he realizes the gift of life, he has to die instead.

Great job, but overall the grammatical errors drove me nuts. I like the way you portray everything in Zidane's state of mind though.

~Leife
Lucrecia LeVrai chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
You did a great job on this fic, so I've added it to a Kuja-centered community.

I liked the way Kuja had changed - yet it was all too late for him, except maybe for a few moments of peace with his younger brother.
cloudstrifejen chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
At the end Kuja is still slowly dying? He can't even walk? Man, must be really suck to walk on his shoes...