|Reviews for What You Want|
| XamierTheNobody chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
| yugiyamisex4eva chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
this is so dirty
| somewhereinthedarkness chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
HOT. My brain melted. I love your Will x Jack.
(blushes)You don't by chance do Will x Jack requests, do you luv?
| FreeBelovedArmy chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Aw, this is really good! Great job!
| lunaryu chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Wow...so HOT XD
Oh Good LORD, this is awesome XD
I love it very much! It's the third story I read from you!
This is awesome XD
I'll hunt more! It's very exciting reading this fic!
| Silverfox588 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I like it. I would work on your punctuation though, you have quite a few sentence fragments and some run on sentences. Other than that, it is very good.