Reviews for Muse
bailar chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
U should write a prologue kinda thing for this story. Like a what happened how did they meet kinda thing pre-muse story I would love that!
GiraffeMiss chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
i love it. please write more
Untamed Goddess chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
oh my goodness, what a beautiful one shot! One of the best MR one shots I've read!
IfWeDieWillWeStillHurt chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
love love love it
Talonted chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Probably the best written Maximum Ride story I've read.

Loved the story. "Screw the rules" indeed.

Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
That was hot and cute way to go
goldensunflowers chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
aww, this story is really good. i think you portrayed max and fang perfectly :)

i always love a good FAX story ;)
Fabulous as FCUK chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Love it


SomethingAboutDarkAngels chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Ana3498 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I loved your story there were just two paragraphs where you acidentilly changed the POV from first person to third person. Here are the paragraphs:

"I won't do the typical angel photos. No, this line will depict a human girl with wings. Like a genetic hybrid. A…a bird-girl. You'll be a normal woman in extraordinary circumstances. I'll try and show a woman fighting to survive… on the run! Give the dress back, you can stay in the clothes you're wearing," he said, reaching for the dress.


"It's been that bad?" she asked, grazing her hand over his unshaven face. He closed his eyes at the contact, breathing in her scent and wondering how he could possibly live his life without her.

But that's it, other than that it was perfect!
skylar chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
in this story i get the picture of fang being a dorky weirdo where u should have portrayed him more as dark and sexy...
Heart Torn Out chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
WOW. GEEZ. The ending was a bit much, doncha think? Not that I hated it, it's always great to get my hormones going, you know. But...And I quote...

"Screaming out my name in ecstacy"?


Well, good job anyways.

And I'm not trying to flame. Don't worry. I'm just pointing that out.

It was good. And cute. I liked how you put their story into this and the oictures. It was great.


"Screaming my name out in ecstacy"?

Do i WANT to know?

Good job by the way.
Stealthy Ninja chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
that was so sweet
Wttlewd chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
flocklover19 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
i loved it (:
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