Reviews for Dear Duncan, MotG Story 4
Izzfrogger chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
Awww, so sweet! Your characterization was spot on! Amazing! :) Tips for improvement?: Mabye use a few more shorter sentences to break it up a bit. Also, in chapter one Duncan calls his eyes brown?-I'm quite sure they're blue. And, ironically, I was just watching an episode of Motg before stumbling on this, and Duncan actually does drop coffee/tea when discovering the people in the hotel room he's managing have been stealing the family silver-Although, this story could be set before that-plus, there are alot of episodes and I only spotted that by chance. Love the idea of a humble hero! Thanks for uploading