|Reviews for The Paladin Protocol|
| PattoG chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
An excellent chapter! I really like the way things turned out.
Sheldon and watch as an adult is excellent.
I hope it continues soon ...
many thanks for sharing your talent with us, wonderful story!
| Fumblepaws chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
Just got back into town and was super excited to read the new chapters. Looking forward to more!
| JuliaGo chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
I love this story! It is most true to character fanfic I have read for this pairing, and so well written (not the case for so much fanfic unfortunately). I hope the updates keep coming!
| Reya Wild chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
I'm sorry that in 22 chapters this is my first time reviewing. You are absolutely talented and you portray Sheldon and Penny and all the characters wonderfully and to the tee. I love the quiet love growing between them and the hesitance and anticipation. It's just so sweet and exciting. It really perks me up to see that you've updated. This possibly the best Sheldon & Penny stories on this site. I also especially adore how you handle Raj. A lot of the time Raj is forgotten, both in stories and on the show, and I love how you've integrated him with the 'good side'. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Great job!
| vannadear chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
| Athania chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
You win so many internets I don't even think there are any left.
Anyway. Yes. Basically. This fic rocks so hard and is one of the few where I will probably squeal out loud if I find that it's been updated. Thanks for another great chapter!
| katdemon1895 chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
first, thanks for sending the translation last chapter, and now onto coments about this chapter, another excellent one, while its sad that leonard and sheldon really are through being friends apparently the insight into leonard's character was very well done and i do rather hope he learns to like himself someday and i'm curious as to whether the oxford trip will help or hurt penny and sheldon's almost but not quite romantic relationship, also curious- will penny manage to land an acting gig at any time? whether she does or not, oh well, an excellent chapter and i look forward to when you next update
| FirstDraft chapter 22 . 3/15/2010
Woohoo - how nice to find 2 new chapters on a Monday. Got a bit tense there for a bit, which was great, and I feel as relieved as Penny does that she's finally done it. I'm now also feeling proper sorry for Leonard, which is also a good thing as I believe it is as it should be - but... His problems are for another story, I guess, much as I'd like to see them solved by the end of this.
Next time you need some French in your story, though, drop me a PM, d'accord? ;-)
| redgrunt84 chapter 21 . 3/14/2010
I thought I'd put my Paradox comments from LJ over here in a more public forum:
Every time a new chapter appears, I find you manage top the previous installment.
You handled the confrontation skillfully, the verbal filletting of Leonard by Penny, Sheldon, and finally Dr. Poligny, and ultimately his discovery of just how badly he erred. I almost, but not quite felt sorry for him.
This was a masterful chapter. Thank you.
| Velf chapter 21 . 3/14/2010
Well, I hope you are proud of yourself. Despite having a 7 week old son I was up till 2am reading this then up again at 6am to read more. I've really enjoyed the story thus far, I can't find a single fault! The reason I started writing my own FF was that I never read stories that followed a plot that did not have me thinking. "I don't like that bit, it would have been better if..." I never once thought that about your story! It is well paced and follows a very logical path with nothing that jars the reader out of the storyline. Having said that, its not predictable and uninteresting, its very much fresh and entertaining.
As for the characters, I can practically hear their voices in my head, as if they were reading from a script. I like how you have focused on L and P's relationship as one of convenience that props up both of their inadequacies. Having witnessed such things in friends and family and the mess it makes when they finally realise there is no love or respect left... It made the plot all that much more believable.
I love your portrayal of Shelly! Just as I would picture him grappling with such emotions! I look forward to reading how he reacts to intimacy XD Something tells me that he will be awkward but hot! He he.
One more thing, Raj is fantastic. Just as he is in the show.
So I am looking forward to more. You are on my favs list. You deserve many more reviews! I'm about to boast about you on twitter ;-)
| kumikokat chapter 21 . 3/14/2010
Finally! Penny broke up with Leonard!
Great chapter, and fast update :) I was so happy for Sheldon. And Penny. And Raj.
Is there going to be another chapter? Please write another chapter! I love this story too much for it to be over. Could we have some more StormFist violence, please? I mean, I loved seeing the different sides to all the characters, and just reading your story in genrral, but the StormFist violence was hilarious :D
| NakeBenihime chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
LOL! This is the best way to describe Sheldon that I've ever heard! "a steaming big bag of crazy-time." Love. It.
| NorikuKitsune chapter 21 . 3/13/2010
WOOT! So worth the wait! I love how she tore into him! Poligny is epic and i am so glad you addressed the academic community's view on the Artic expedition, because i definitely think the show glossed over it for not being funny... Penny is a good friend to Sheldon and even while she is realizing all that emotional stuff about herself, she is being supportive. I am so disappointed in Leonard in general, but you nailed him on the head and were able to explain everything he has done while also allowing for how smart he supposedly is... ans Raj! :huggles: he is so freak'n awesome. Your story has made him grow as a character and a friend, i absolutely love him! And now when i watch episodes of the show i see bits and pieces of your Raj and love him even more! I look forward to where this is going, now that Penny is free... and i wonder what her StormFist friends are gonna say, probably "Finally, you go girl... what was up with that anyways?" Your build up for the break up, and your character development is amazing, and i am in awe of it... it must have taken patience to actually write that all out and build it up... i would want to just jump in and squash Leonard but your way was so much more dynamic and meaningful... amazing work, as always.
| peacekeeperchuck chapter 21 . 3/13/2010
This is freaking awesome!
I'm so happy that Penny has FINALLY dumped Leonard!
I love this story, and I can't wait to read the next part!
| Waterwench chapter 21 . 3/13/2010
I was chortling with glee through this entire chapter! Thank you, SpaceAnJL! At last-Leonard realizes he has no one to blame but himself and that he was pretty evil for screwing with Sheldon's research. Penny stands up like some kick-ass, shoot from the hip, modern-day version of Venus Anadyomene-and I was continually sqeeing at the mental image of her in Sheldon's shirt and belt! Sparkling. Wonderful. We adore you!