Reviews for Countdown
Cocoaflower chapter 10 . 2/4/2014
Aww... wow, little Leo and Raph!
Cocoaflower chapter 9 . 2/4/2014
Ahahaha, good one, Donnie, Leo! XD
Cocoaflower chapter 8 . 2/4/2014
Oh man... XD I love the fact that you put Mikey in there, whereas Leo and Splinter never noticed. XP
LovePeaceandMusic chapter 10 . 2/19/2010
Yay, it's arrived! It was very good, the silent oath mentioned at the end really tied it up nicely.
candelight chapter 10 . 2/15/2010
A one, A two, A one-two-three-four-!


Incredibly, Remarkably sweet. These little tots have each other's

Short and sweet-and a resonating note that carries into the series. Very good.
candelight chapter 9 . 2/15/2010
Aw...*Shakes head.* Typical Raph. Knowing Leatherhead, he WOULD be snarling at the insult...

Heh...a cute combination, these two. :D Mr. Tough Guy and


Great way to conclude a story-with a race. All is well. Nicely done.
candelight chapter 7 . 2/15/2010
*Smiles sadly.*

Everyone DOES have day, occasionally.

Ah-you're really expanding into the emotional aspect of the TMNT. A lovely and bittersweet job. *Wipes eyes.* Though you're quite good at humor, the genre of "hurt/comfort" is not at all a bad one for you!

And the ever emotional Mikey breaks down...*Sighs, sends Mikey a tissue.*

Superb. :D
candelight chapter 6 . 2/15/2010

*Goes off into room and sobs.*

Ah...I believe I may know THIS scene...*Sighs wearily.* When Splinter sent Leo away to be a better leader in South America...

*Shakes head.*

Your imagery is superb, as always, Rhoda-chan. Immpecably, bittersweetly, done.

Excellent work.
candelight chapter 5 . 2/15/2010

Aw...(Sorry I took so long to review...!)

This chapter made me sad-but very elaborate comparisons. You rarely see Donatello-chan upset unless the heat is really on...

*Groans, slaps forehead.* Ah, Leo...

Very nicely done. :D I like this immensely!
Longing for Leo chapter 10 . 2/8/2010
Aw! I LOVED this one! Chibi Leo and Raph are SO CUTE! Plus it was simply adorable that they were being all big-brotherly, and even cuter that they made the oath for each other too. XD My favorite line: "Nothing wrong with spit." Lol. This was worth the wait! I don't know what you were talking about before, you're great at Leo & Raph interactions. And yes, these drabble-like chapters were enjoyable to read too. :D
Mikell chapter 10 . 2/6/2010
Oh seriously, frickin... just ... D'AW!

That was probably one of the cutest, and coolest Leo/Raph things I've seen. Awesome. I think you captured the boys really well. I love it. Nice little glimpse into the chibi's world.

Rejoicing in the day,

M chapter 9 . 2/5/2010
I love these! Please please continue doing more one shot stories of our favorite green guys _~
Estar chapter 9 . 2/4/2010
You got to love the brotherly love :D
ponygirl-loves-mcqueen chapter 9 . 2/2/2010
Haha, I liked this chappy. It was fun!
Cat488 chapter 9 . 2/2/2010
loved it.

could you do a Donnie and Raph one, pretty plz? i love their interactions.

oh, and i was too lazy to log on, but my user really is Cat488, so yeah.

good luck and update soon!
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