Reviews for Countdown
TheChibberd chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
Brill
KARIN848 chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
This was cute! Great job! :)
Beautiful Jade chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
Ok. That's better. Good Job!
AshXDawn4Ever chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
awesome and very cute :D

Happy New Year :)

x
Ninetales897 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
DRESS SUGESTION:

carribean blue, spagetti strap ankle length, and slit up side
SparkyStarZ-13 chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
Aww, how sweet...

Nice job, Ace.

~Keep up the awesome work!
Farla chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Space out your story properly. See how everyone else's stories are? Or this review? Like that.

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer.

Battle transcripts are not actually that interesting.

Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category.

Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it." If there's no speech verb in the break, you use a dash, like "Hi. This - " He looked around. "- is it."
Beautiful Jade chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Little low on detail but awesome.

Update soon!
SparkyStarZ-13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Wow, good job. I cant wait for the next chapter! You captured the characters perfectly, and although you didnt use a lot of detail, it was enough. Seriously, awesome job.

~Keep up the awesome work!
AshXDawn4Ever chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
awesome keep it up, i can't wait for the next chapter :) x