|Reviews for Birthday|
| Blairx6661 chapter 13 . 5/30/2011
This story was absolutely amazing, you write wonderfully :) I thought it was very sad in some parts, which you described perfectly. You're very talented! :)
| star574 chapter 13 . 8/15/2010
Srsly, why aren't your review counts higher? They should be. :)
| star574 chapter 12 . 8/15/2010
Ah ha ha. Edward sampling menstrual blood. Love it. What? He's just being scientific!
| star574 chapter 11 . 8/15/2010
I can just imagine all the guilt swirling around... Emoward for sure has to be making an appearance
| star574 chapter 10 . 8/15/2010
"But is it not also possible that estrus is just some ruderal vestige of our humanity? An impotent remnant?"
Just curious about the usage of " ruderal" in this context. It's been my understanding that it usually refers to a species that is the first to populate/colonize an area, typically the first to appear after some form or tragedy. Unless you were implying that estrus was something that happened even though the possibility of procreation was nil?
| star574 chapter 9 . 8/14/2010
He keeps saying "children" - does he think that somehow she would be able to carry to term and deliver multiple times?
| star574 chapter 8 . 8/14/2010
Gah. A cold speculum during a pelvic exam is bad enough... Unwelcome vamp fingers is an entirely different matter
| star574 chapter 7 . 8/14/2010
Joham. Bastard. Too bad the Volturi didn't take care of him. Did they even try to track him down?
| star574 chapter 6 . 8/14/2010
Argh. I'm so very glad that i'll never be a hormonal teen ever again... And never have to deal with boys, either. :)
| star574 chapter 5 . 8/14/2010
Picking up Alice's tricks in order to get her way? Yup, she's definitely growing up.
| star574 chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
Heh. Edward must be having kittens over all this.
| star574 chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
Ah, the sex talk. Doesn't seem like anyone is quite ready to tackle that with nessie. Thank goodness for the circle to look forward to.
| star574 chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Gee, i'm surprised Jacob didn't take the opportunity to tell a tribal story about Raven. :)
| Laziesttiger chapter 13 . 7/12/2010
Thoroughly enjoyed this story, so well written, thank you. I could wish Joram had suffered a little more though...
I noticed you never write anything from Jacob's POV? If you do write more about this pairing, maybe you might want to try it?
| FelicityT chapter 13 . 6/18/2010
1 of the best after BD nessie stories I have read thanks for writing. Felicity