|Reviews for So You Just Left Me?|
| xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
Actually, by this point in time, the British were against slavery. So I don't think they would have a Negro slave... And America still had a lot of slavery going on at this point, and they were very cruel to slaves. But since Britannia is just the evil side of Arthur, I guess he would be cruel. I hope Arthur wakes up soon, because he needs a hug! Go Alfred, go hug him! :)
| akane sarumara chapter 4 . 2/10/2010
Great fic! I read the doujinshi (Utter shock... that face Alfred made when he took... *shot before spoilers* Point is, Al claiming to be a hero is WAY out of place for me now... but I'll get over it in a week, I guess), and you don't fail at all! I like Naomi, and Britannia, too, somehow... I wonder how you'll write Canada and psycho!America, update soon!
About getting to his ship... in case you don't have an idea about this yet, maybe an another scene about her fighting bad guys plus her failures at houswork would be convincing (way late meals, etc.)
Update as soon as possible!
| Smiley Smackdown chapter 3 . 2/3/2010
-_-This is really interesting! Could you send me a link for the doujinshi? Please update soon! :D-_-
| artemis89 chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
i don't think you'd failed. i really like your story. like you i read that doujinshi and, well, it's beautiful (even if it made me cry all night when i saw it. *sniff*)
even if Britannia is in some way the bad character here, i really, really like him. i don't know why, but in my mind he's a hero because he only want to protect Arthur (ahi,ahi Alfred, your hero's title is in danger!XD)
anyway i hope you'll go on with this. like i said i like your story. and maybe i'm hoping that it'll have an happy ending (i'm such a romantic!)
| xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
I love this story. The doujinshi was quite sad...
About Britannia, as he is composed of the anger and pain Arthur has felt since the Revolution, I suggest making him a bit...darker. But this is great, keep it up please! :)
| LostDonut chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
if Naomi's homeland is Washington...
why is her name Japanese? o.o
I also find it a bit werid that Arthur is carrying around a sword O.o
that's more of Japan's thing no?
It'll make more sense if Arthur carries a gun or something...
other than that...
great chap D
| xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
Since England has the same voice actor as Sasukefrom Naruto, I keep hearing Sasuke for Britannia! I watched the doujinshi, it was awesome and so sad. Interesting, England's so wrapped up in his own grief that created an alternate personality...which is made up of the anger he's bottled up. Poor America and England... Update soon!
| Kakoii-Ninja chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
I really do love this, it's so amazing! But I believe this belongs in the "in-progress" section, not complete! It kinda throws people off. XD
| Nevermore09 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Wow, this was really interesting. I enjoyed reading it :D
I wonder what it would be like if it was a full length story... -Hinthint- XD
Btw, where did watch this doujinshi and what was it called?
| LostDonut chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
reminded me a moment of Code Geass XD
update soon D
| akuoni chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Aku is fascinated!
And curious to read the doujinshi...
I am going to keep an eye on this
| xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
This is really good! Please give me a link to the doujinshi! Update soon!
| EnduraAngel chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I loved it and I can't wait until you post more of this story. 3
| Thereshouldbeablankhere chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
It's an interesting start and could be a very good story. However, and believe me I hate to say this, I think it feels a little rushed but that could just be me! But I'm actually interested in seeing where this goes.
Keep up the good work