Reviews for Fight for us
hi chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
ok so most of your twilight stories are the same and i have something to say nobody likes reading stories with bad grammer and spelling you spelt many things wrong and i would advise you to look over your work and have someone proof read it before submitting it thank you and good story except the ending was so common it got boring.
ElenaDarren chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
It was fine but I would advise to re-read and check for grammar nmistakes, because there was a lot of them, but other than that it was pretty good.
JellyJules chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
loved it. its so sweet