Reviews for Re: Yin Yang Who?
C.R.Martin chapter 12 . 8/16/2012
Keep up the good work, Pen. I'll be watching.
Apples Of Avalon chapter 9 . 11/29/2011
Violent explosions and partial nudity? I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

Cool chapter, I really liked Garnet's character. Plus, nothing beats a reptile in a suit.

But a question: What does Novi Finis means? It sound Latin; does it has something to do with the story?
Apples Of Avalon chapter 10 . 11/27/2011

Ok, so Henry got sacked...well bummer. And what's that about the Triple Crown Alliance? I take it's an alliance between the royal families of the stink aadvarks, the Redneckistanians and...ummm...I can't think of the third one...

Whoa, the plotline gets darker by the chapter...sweet :D
soumakanzaki chapter 9 . 8/21/2011
That guy Decru some shit stole this story
Apples Of Avalon chapter 8 . 4/7/2011
It's official: You completely twisted what was once a simple, innocent kids' show into one of the darkest fanfictions I've ever read...

Kudos to you, my good sir...(or lady)

But now I want to know what's in store for Yin and Suzie...
Apples Of Avalon chapter 7 . 3/12/2011

*ahem* Anyways, I loved how you mixed Christmas carols and little kids' stories with the dark atmosphere of the story. That was great!

But a question: So far, we've seen the points of view of the heroes. Are they going to be points of view of the villains, too?
XeoGhio chapter 6 . 9/29/2010
Wow. Yang's pretty upset. I really love how you put so much detail into every chapter
Apples Of Avalon chapter 6 . 9/13/2010
They were playing a game called "Giggity Giggity"?...Wow, no comment.

And Yang broke the fourth wall. Just lovely...
GriffinsMustFly chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Idk if I've read this before (it seems familiar to me) but you are very descriptive and the only thing I really have to say is to watch your dialouge. It can be a little off and I'd even suggest adding in more, not just some phrases here and there and some quotes from the episode. Make it your own.
bunnypopcorn chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
AMAZING! :) Keep writing, 'cause you're awesome at it!
XeoGhio chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
This one's really good. I love all the detail, how even the less important characters in the series receive an even amount of storytime.
Apples Of Avalon chapter 5 . 8/13/2010
...You really love Digimon, don't you?

I didn't even notice today was Friday the 13! Wow, I'm dumb...

Anyway, nice chapter :)
Apples Of Avalon chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
If there's something I like about this story, it's that it a lot deeper than wat you expect from a show like YYY. PLus, you get to see what characters from the show (even minor characters) are thinking. Nice.

And just to break all the seriousness: DOMINIQUE GOT PWNED!

Well anyways, I got a question: Are Henry, Suzie and Burton OCs of yours, or minor characters I forgot about?
Apples Of Avalon chapter 3 . 2/9/2010
Most of the parents' POV talk about this great war...This is getting more and more interesting!
Apples Of Avalon chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Wow, this chapter was really dark, it made me sad...but then again, I love dark stories, even if they make me sad...Anyway, good job with writing the Warriors' POV.

Will there be more characters involved? Maybe villains like Carl or Herman or Yuck?
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