|Reviews for First Kiss|
| Aronim chapter 1 . 6/5
A few mistakes here and there, as you already seem to know.
| fann chapter 1 . 3/13
Fret not nor faint this is a good story can u make one with oblivous artemis and a pinning holly plz plz plz plz it was a really great story
| Fher34 chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Artemis is going to drive her to the point of madness. Or give her a heart attack xD j loved it c:
| LisaAbiona15 chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I think it is a great story. It's interesting and .. just perfect
| Frosty Wolf chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
An amusing read, good work.
| Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Now I know where that Soy-sauce Icecream themed one came from... but my original question there stands.
| lunar47 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I liked this a lot :)
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
| punnylove chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Very sweet. Loved the tidbit about Holly being the "love of Beckett's life-much to his brother's chagrin."
| dropsofpuresky chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
so I just went through this entire arty x holly archive in an attempt to find this story, because I finally got an account...and I read it just after you first posted it.. anyways...
this is one of my favorite pieces that I've read on any fanfiction section, and I just wanted to tell you how much I adore it.
Seriously. This was so creative, so realistic and in character, and made me smile.
so thank you...
| Isabelle7994 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
So many of the sexier fanfics on here are badly written and uncomfortable to read, but this is great! Very attractive )
| Ellie chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
It's (Other than the grammatical errors XD) an amazing story. I love your fanfiction (especially the Holly/Arty), and keep it up!
| Thief of Black Winged Hearts chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
This is so freaking adorable. I like your style, it's quite enjoyable. Keep writing like this!
| PeanutButterBirthmark chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
This was great! Positively delicious! I was fully expecting lemon till I remembered the rating!
I love your Arty, very sexy but somehow still him, cool and smooth. I must admit, I swooned a little while reading, just a bit!
I'm going to your profile right now and reading the rest of your stories!
| clairebear xoxo chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Nice! cute, but sexy )