|Reviews for Sweetest Girl|
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
| RandomMumble chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I actually think that Lucius and Cissy are true lovers.
However I enjoyed reading this!
And this is what makes a good story - make someone get lost in something he/she does not agree with.
So, all I can say is:
| MadameCissy chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I scrolled through your list and found this one. This one breathes bitterness and resentment. Narcissa resents Lucius and yet he seems almost unaware how he has changed her. Very much in character and her comment "You made sure to change that" was just the perfect way to describe how he changed her.
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I love the way you portrayed the two of them! It's a very sad... but very beautiful piece. Your descriptions are just perfect.
I really like it :O
| sidex chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I love your Narcissa. :) Really, I do. I must read another Narcissa/Lucius fic of yours.
| HerTaintedQuill chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
You did well in this songfic...Good job.
| Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
You seem to have a talent for hitting the perfect balance of anguish and beauty. I loved it, in particular the description of Lucius in the moonlight.
| xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Well, I think it was a great story. I can the angst, I can feel their misery. I liked it.
| Valentina-Lestrange chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Another great Lucius/Narcissa fic. So wonderfully told. Brilliant.
| rhea lupin chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I liked it! :)
(I leave really bad reviews ... 'M sorry. I DID like it, though! : ...)
| ACCT REMOVED chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I thought it was sad. It was very vague i thought, but in a nice sort of way. Hmm...I would love to know more about what happened XD
| over-rehearsed chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I liked it. I thought it was strangely beautiful...
favorites. I loved it.
| Writting2StayHalfSane chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
I love Narcissa/Lucius. It's such an interesting and complex dinamic. The imagery in this was excellent. Well done.
| Schermionie chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Marvellous. :) I absolutely loved your description, how you made all the words matter. You made Narcissa and Lucius's relationship so very cold, but it was so bitter, too - there /was/ feeling, still. I thought that that was far more realistic, somehow, than simply claiming that theirs was a marriage of convenience, that they had never felt anything for each other at all. It was certainly more interesting.
Nitpicks: in the second sentence, 'casted' should be 'cast' (it's an irregular verb). Curiously, when I first read this the comma usage seemed a bit odd, but reading back it's pretty much fine, just a few where I wouldn't personally put them. However, the comma before 'his light' in "Slowly she turned around staring up into...her husband, his light hair – an almost perfect match to her own..." should definitely be either a semicolon or full stop.
Other than that, nothing to really criticise. I really quite liked this - so very atmospheric, and I love this pairing. I definitely think you characterise Narcissa and Lucius well... and you are now added to my Author Alert list. I'll definitely be checking out some more of your stuff! _
| noeru K chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
That line is spot on...'sweetest girl', such a degrading term for Lucius to use..haha