|Reviews for The Price of Honesty|
| Maunzeli chapter 39 . 8/26/2012
Second time through was as enjoyable as the first. Thanks again.
| darstar chapter 9 . 7/7/2012
Hey! Just found your stories and I am really enjoying them. Are you still in DC? Very sad to hear about Stan, though
| Different Child chapter 39 . 6/7/2011
God woman another AMAZING story that I really need. I keep reading too fast. XDD I got through this one in like...24 hours or so? Your stories are addicting...in the best of ways of course. ) Does the story about Tomblin fit more into the timeline before the rest of the stories or do they coincide? I guess i could take a break from ff and go and read that... Only because it's yours! I should start reading on FP again but I can't motivate myself to do much on ff either... But you are awesome! And I like your A/Ns about you b/c it's interesting! You've got a really neat life! lol. ) I'm gonna go stop reviewing like an idiot since I'm probably not making any sense other than YOU ARE AWESOME! 333
| Karen19 chapter 22 . 12/1/2010
Yes, the Methow valley is strangely beautiful, but that's beside the point. You have that area described very accurately. Curious to find out who did it, I don't think Kim would, having read, very recently all the stories, including the fictionpress story, that she's in, she's a wonderful OC in my opinion.
| katesari chapter 39 . 11/30/2010
really liked it. going to read more... bye
| 2merryann chapter 39 . 9/22/2010
Another wonderful story! I indulged myself for my birthday and stayed up all night to finish reading. I'll be paying in a few hours when the baby wakes up! Thank you for writing!
| A Smiling Cat chapter 39 . 9/9/2010
Although I have to admit I skipped the Tomblin an Cunningham long parts ... yeah, I know, I shouldn't.
But I really liked your story. You do great with cases, it's amazing
Keep writing like that
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| random chapter 39 . 8/31/2010
I love your version of the directions the different team members take, though I am slightly more partial to the actual TV shows storyline. I will admit the thought of Team Gibbs breaking up make me a little teary (:]), so I rather like Ziva becoming an actual agent. However as an alternative this is a close second, and I loved reading about the whole Tony and Ziva thing, something I think most fans of the show are waiting for. The really romantic ones, like me, anyway! Overall really creative stories, and great capture of the individual charecters. Can't wait for the next one!
| Jesusrocks chapter 39 . 7/31/2010
Aw, I'm really glad you didn't make Tomblin the killer. She was too nice to kill someone...but you could say the same thing about Lee; she seemed pretty nice. However, she was also being blackmailed so that shouldn't count. Anywho, I'm very glad you didn't make Tomblin the killer because the twist was good and I didn't expect it! I normally can smell a twist a mile off but this one really threw me. I would have expected…I’m not sure who I would have expected but I know I wasn’t expecting Cremieux. Great job :) but then again; you always do a great job. You always capture the characters and make the story believable.
I started reading Of Jews and Gentiles and then found your other stories and couldn't stop reading! I think I read all your long stories in about 2 weeks? Maybe three, I can't remember: all I know is that I have stayed up way too late because I just couldn't stop reading. Everything is great—you have a real gift.
I also want to thank you for your service to our country. I have such respect for the people who are willing to serve; I can't put into words what it means to me. 'Thank you' doesn't sound adequate but it’s all I can offer—thank you.
Just as an idea, but for a story you should really explore the relationship between Gibbs and Gracy. Gibbs is accused of trying to kill Gracy (of course he didn’t) and all the evidence points to him. McGee is charged with obstruction of justice, because he’s starting to act a little like Tony and can’t let the case go, for interfering with an investigation when another team takes over. Tony and Ziva are called back to D.C. as a favor to McGee to watch as the other team (NCIS or not) works the case.
It could be as simple as someone who wants revenge against Gibbs or it could be like a conspiracy with higher-ups involved. The conspiracy could also involve something Tony is working on from Bahrain; it could be global. Mike could even get involved somehow because of something in Mexico.
Gracy doesn’t believe it was Gibbs but does have to confront him about his past. It could really delve deep into Gibbs past and show a lot about his character and how he became the person he is today.
Like I said, it’s just an idea. Take it, leave it, laugh at it, it’s up to you. I can’t wait for a new story cause reading your stuff is like watching the show, only better because Tony and Ziva are together and Gibbs is happy…you just need to get McGee someone to love, I’m going to say Abby because I’m a total McAbby shipper, but it’s up to you.
Can’t wait for an update or new story! Hope you have a great day and again, thank you for your service. I don’t think I can say that enough. Best wishes!
| Laplandgurl chapter 39 . 5/28/2010
I finally got to the end...and I have to say I hated to see it end..but I take comfort from the fact that you promise that it won't be the end of this storyline.
And I love your OC Gracy and her two kids...I would love to see another story featuring her working closely with Gibbs and his new team that would also Tony and Ziva having to help with the case...but it's your muse...
Until then...happy writing...and I look forward to your next story...Cheers!
| Laplandgurl chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
Hey I just had to come out of the shadows where I had been lurking and tell you how much I enjoy your stories. It is so refreshing to read a story where I know that the medical facts are going to be correct. And plus you capture all the NCIS characters perfectly...are you sure that you don't already write for the show?
Anyhow...I just got to the end of this chapter...and I was just floored when Gibbs said that Stan was the case..whoa...now I've got to hurry up and finish reading this story...a canuck fan...
| hannahelaine13 chapter 6 . 5/2/2010
Another continuity problem: In Reveille, they figure out that Ari was born in 1969. Sometime in early season 7, they find out Ziva was born in 1982. That's a 13 year difference. But the picture of Ziva's of her, Ari, and Tali show Ziva and Ari looking very close in age. Like, within two years.
| serendipitous-15 chapter 39 . 4/16/2010
So I finally got around to finishing your story in my backlog of stories and unread email alerts (seriously the fact that gmail pretty much gives me so much space that I can literally not delete anything forever is not helping) and my conclusion is this: I loved it. I loved that not only did we get something about our favorite team but you gave us original characters that we got learn about and, in my case, actually like enough that we WANT to know their backstory and care about how the outcome effects them as well.
| luvztorite chapter 39 . 4/7/2010
Another great story. I was so glad to see this one. Your stories have such substance, they're well researched, and the characterizations are so well done with both established characters and new ones. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next one.
| Kastia chapter 39 . 3/4/2010
Great story! Glad to hear that there will be another one in this story, I was a little worried since it had the most ending like ending that it might be the last. I'm interested to see how Gibbs and Tony work together now that they're in a more equal position. Keep writing!