Reviews for Forever and Always
wasp123 chapter 6 . 5/10
Great story awesome ending . You could have elaborated more on Lisbon andJanes reunion%. Fifteen years and no man in Lisbon's life .What and where was Jane
those fifteen years The ending was too simple
lot of unanswered questions. Read more likes fairy tale
Adiver chapter 6 . 2/7/2010
wow great ending :D
AccountKiller456789 chapter 6 . 2/7/2010
Please continue! I really love this story do far. Its such a creative idea and I think you are very talented. Please, please, please continue! And I love how Jane just shows at at the right moment! 3 yay! haha
Viktorija chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
Well done!
knacky chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
well I really enjoyed this stroy even though I am a bit confused I can't see why Jane would have left her ?

anyway I really liked it and the flashbacks were really nice.
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 6 . 1/31/2010

Very abrupt. :P

good, nonetheless.
Sheethkal Shahar chapter 6 . 1/31/2010
It's done? What. Well, I liked this a lot. I wish you'd elaborate a bit more on what happens afterwards. Annabel is crazy. The end.

I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Viktorija chapter 5 . 1/18/2010
Wow!Great job!
Nancy chapter 5 . 1/18/2010
Oy! Don't jump Isabel!
Adiver chapter 5 . 1/18/2010
"don't call me sir""yes ma'am" i like :D
FantasyFreak4Life chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Will Jane ever make a appearance in this story?
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Honeslty, if she jumped off the Best Western, it wouldn't hurt her. :P

Good chapter. Is see you did some research on Petaluma. :D
TheFrenchMermaid chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
oh more and more action :)

when is Jane coming back ? *FFL required in here, asap, it's a matter of life and death XD*

anyway, I like your story (yeah I know, I say that everytime, but I do love all your stories P ), I can't wait for the next chapter !


Sheethkal Shahar chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Oh dear, oh dear. They're both dead, and now. :[ Well, this'll be interesting, and I can't wait for Jane's appearance. That'll be great.

rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 4 . 1/11/2010
OMG this is amazing! Ties in really well to the prompt!

Im just a little confused the story it says isabell was stillborn and then janes leaves...and isabell is left outside an orphanage...Then shes adopted. If shes in the same grade as louise(Im guessing theyre the same age, like most people are in the same grade...Im from ireland btw)then where did louise come from or was isabell her twin...or did lisbon have louise before she had isabell? Please let me know! I dont think grade is the same as year in the US so that might be part of why Im confused!

Anyhoo, please continue when you can cos I cant wait to see what happens next, its getting really interesting D
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