This chapter should be rated M due to some material that would not be out of place on Game of Thrones (some unspeakable crimes), there are quite a few grammar errors (though it is readable), and some stuff makes no sense when compared to canon (for example, Umbridge should be in Azkaban for war crimes, a death sentence for terminating a pregnancy is a bit extreme, and Ronald Weasley should not be able to overpower Hermione Granger (plus he is very out of character). Interesting concept, though.

I just reread this story.

I love how you manage to make a revenge story feel not empty and devoid of human meaning.

It started right off with Harry/Hermione and their relationship, and just kept on adding real human concern and hope even in the middle of all the revenge stuff.

Really great read, thank you!

Nice. It was good. The Ron part was a bit too much for me, but I still enjoyed this book. Keep being awesome!

Your depiction of little ginny, and especially young Luna, are my two most favorite ever.

This is still one of my absolute favorite chapters in any HP fanfic i have ever read.

It's funny how Quirrellmort is sitting and enjoying the drama show without any care of the world.

Man, having Fudge eating at the palm of their hands was a brilliant move, the man is an idiot but he is useful as an ally.

Excellent story! I particularly enjoyed where Dumbledore entered the Room of Requirements.

Your story in general most of Fan Fic's Wrighters version of JK' world have far less holes in there story, you wright better then JK!

Anouther Fan Fic i read Tom almost died by Dragon Dung bombing after he came back Don't remember which, Durty Dipers can be just as nasty. :P

I LOVE Luna and hate JK for under use of her.
She is smart and so dreamy at the same time.

Neville is another favorite. He is special smart with plants and shy at the same time, and many way like Harry.

The Weasleys in KJ world they mean good, but there much wroung. She should know where the platform is and she a nutter and dangerius.

Loveing the story

Z-Zen1 has a point, that shit didn't sit too well with me either and I'm not a peraon who normally has a problem with edgy jokes. Somehow the forced transoperation as comedic karmic justice rubs me the wrong way too.

five year old is writing this author fiat bash fic with a hater boner cause hes a loser in school with no friends. Cringe. Delete this

Didnt Dan meet Amelia already when McG and she visited the Grangers ?

"Mr. Potter, may I have a quick word?Velocity. perfect.