Reviews for The whole world knows
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
A great story. Very well written.
True Colours chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
I've read this before, so why didn't I review? )O.o
Anyway, I like this little comedy. 'Eddykins.' It sums up everything that's wrong with the EdwardxBella pairing. She's just so worshipping and ick. Mind out with how you write Bella's 'voice'; she seemed more openly whiney and bad-mouthed than in the book. Rather than longsufferingly whiney :). Also a couple of punctuation errors:
"it's me," he lauged, I could here Emmett booming in the background.' Capital 'I' for 'It's me', and I would have had a full stop rather than a comma after 'he laughed.' Also you spelled 'laughed' wrong, but I'm sure that's just a typo. Anyway, good stuff overall, just be careful over small grammar points like this.
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