Reviews for Junie B Jones twins
Guest chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
It's a nice story and idea and all, but it's a but hard to read. A suggestion might be to work with the dialogue
junie b jones chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
rachel chapter 2 . 4/5/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
This is some gay ass shit. Write better
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
go suck a dick you gay little shit.
Junie chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
Keep telling u s the story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
ur grammar sucks. how old are you, 5?
Shaylie-Daughter-of-Poseidon chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
So cute. But you should update soon. Oh, and, don't forget the quotations when someone is talking.
Shaylie-Daughter-of-Poseidon chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This is constructive criticism, but you should check the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The basic storyline is cute, though.
Rochelly101 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Im sorry but its not good. There is alot of improper grammer and the story has almost no supported details.
Schoolrules2013 chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
i love it :D
fansisters02 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I can't read this, no punctuation, qoutes, paragraphs, sorry.
sunshine-bug-10 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
it was sosososososo good
Taylor Swift luvr chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
ok. it was a little hard to read because it was smushed together and some words like doctor were spelled wrong. i didn't understand it and you should use a beta. hopefully you accept this as a cc.
FemaleJester1212 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Okay where do I begin? *Sigh* girlygirlygirl, this story is confusing me because there are no quotation marks for who's saying what,and not only that but I think you should add more to each chapter because chapter 2 looks like it should be added to chapter 1 for instance.
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