Reviews for It Runs In The Family |
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![]() ![]() This was fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm seriously loving this verse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Youse did good. |
![]() ![]() that's awesome how the bat family has infiltrated Gotham crime and police. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this- it's so funny and exciting :D A good read~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() More Robbie, please! And Jack and Matches. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing story Charlene that just proves there's more than one way to justice than a Bat in the Wayne - er Bat - Er Malone family with a Hawke,Pop Oracle and everybody's favorite caretakers Alfred and Leslie looking over Robbie and Jack and yet it worked they were under, but safe. Also the way Bruce complements the boys at the end: Bruce moved closer to Dick, "Youse did good kid," then turning to Tim, added, "Youse both did good." Tim grinned widely. "Thanks Pop," Dick said in his best Robbie Malone voice. "You're both pretty good at de family business," Matches voice replied with a slight smile. It's Great! He so rarely does it and to do it as Pop I think helps him do it even more great idea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm working on all your Maloneverse stories again (somewhat out of order) and I still can't get over how much I love your characterizations of these guys! Anyway, this is probably about my fifth reading of these stories, and it just dawned on me this time that I would love to see the story of Tim and Dick's camping trip. Guy time between the two of them is always good, and you've really peaked my curiosity with the few comments dropped in this chapter. As a has-been part-time fanfiction author I realize that writing a story like that on request doesn't always work, but I for one would love to see it if you ever get the urge to write it (or have already written it). Again, love your stories, and can't wait to see any possible continuations/expansions in the future! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow! I enjoyed this series so much. I love when the Bats do undercover work, and there just isn't enough of it in fanfic. The characterizations of all of their personalities are perfect, and the flow makes this read just like one of the comics would. I like the subtle father/son bonding we get of Bruce and the boys, as well as them acting like brothers. The street gang style is also really good, and basically just sounds and feels real. This is definitely a favorite of mine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what I could say about this story that would live up to what it is. It's an interesting exercise in the world of undercover and how their real identites and their nighttime identites got mixed up in it. Such love for the scene where Batman was interrogating Robbie about Matches. I loved the dialogue, the character interactions and the little in-jokes (Oracle Pharmaceuticals). Thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() Excellent story! I love the way everyone in the Bat-family got mentioned...and the interactions between characters was wonderful and realistic to their characters. Keep up the great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lots of tense situations in this story but i liked it nonetheless. can't wait to read the next one. later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done. Gave us a completely different view of the city. Really loved some of the scenes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA! VERY nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when's the next Malone family reunion? |