Reviews for The End
Ryalla-Swiftwind chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Very well done. The pain you evoked was very real, and the end brought tears to my eyes.
Juliafied chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
this was hauntingly sad and beautiful. well done.
Ganja21 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
What, no Qunari Wardens. Tht might be a decent story, Sten bringing some of the Qun for the Joining.
kirbster676 chapter 2 . 9/8/2010
Sad and beautiful.
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
you keep what you kill.
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
how sad
rockpunk92 chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Wow, you write really well, your stories are engaging, and just wow. Wow.
jyrenze chapter 2 . 6/29/2010
Wow, that was a great portrayal of that ending, but so sad.
Gamesplayers chapter 2 . 4/25/2010
It is sad how great stories never get much reviews.

This story of yours is a piece of art, I shall write. Deep and so dramatic...

Yet, their fate as wardens wasn't meant to be easy.

Your characterization was amazing.

Swann Hunter chapter 2 . 2/23/2010
Quite possibly the saddest ending I've read. Creating such emotional depth while keeping everyone in character is very difficult, but you definitely succeeded. The last few lines are just perfect...Poor Zevran.
Sabella chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Terrific tale-telling - an excellent offering of superbly blended story ingredients that should sate the most discriminating readers' appetites. And, the frosting on this exquisite little morsel? Your delicious - and generous - writing style. A winner, for sure.

Tatiana1 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Re-read it.


Can't wait for sequel.
Apish Has-Been chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Sad and beautiful, full of emotion. I loved it.
dragonagefan chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I actually cried at the end of this! I have not yet been able to play through the game with an Alistair break-up. The emotions you convey are amazing. I really enjoyed reading it.