|Reviews for The Breaks|
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
This is great, very descriptive and well-paced. Always love the limp!Sam and caring Dean.
| PADavis chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Oh I liked this one too, despite it being so short. LOL. It was just the right length - economical use of words and I loved the show not tell here.
I'm kind of skirting around the Dean/Cas fics for a few minutes but I will try one.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
What a shock to the older Winchester; but at least he did find his brother - and alive!
It's a good thing that Norton guy lived there right on the beach and was at home to help them out. Otherwise there would have been no hope at all in those weather conditions, I guess.
“[...] blanketing the ground right up to the shoreline in fluffy white death.” Awesome phrasing, Xina! I love it.
Great tension and story-telling here.
| iris254 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Great story! I loved it!
| carocali chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Beautiful descriptions of the oceanside and the house. I could see everything you were describing. Well done!
Always a sucker for a Big Brother story and you did not disappoint!
| friendly chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
great job. would love to see more of this..