Reviews for Melt
Jenean chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Never going to eat popsicles again.
Takara yume chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
epic epic and kiny~~ awesome smut! XDD
Alexandra112 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
-Red faced from embarrisment peeking from behind pulled up t-shirt and glad to be a girl-

H-how many male readers would have gotten aroused from this?

So glad Im a girl so I wouldnt have to shower twice in an hour.

Mmmf-Hides behind shirt again-
LadyWitchita chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
XD. I like your creativity.

I know... I'm WAY late.

Oh well *shrugs* SQUUUUUUE~! That was awesome.
Candy3314 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Hehehe nice ending _ and Roxas getting fucked by a Popsicle is priceless
P5hng-Me-A'Wy chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
oh man, the ending made me laugh.

very sexy, by the way.
Hannahble chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
LOL the ending make me laugh XD pretty hot, though had nothing much to do with the new year in the end XD
hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
loved the kinkiness! Great job! D
terra hotaru chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Another hot fiction from you. xD ah, as usual. you are still awesome and I love this one a lot! I blame you for spurring up my kinkiness!
littlen00bgyn chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This story These Things win

What's Axel gonna do, shove the popsicle up Roxas's ass?

Called it! By the way, that fuckin' HURTS! Roxas should be screaming in agony

Amazing. I love this. And Axel's last line is full of winsauce.
The mental patient chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Tis smexy lemon cookies. I thank ur bery much.

Hail the LEMON!

*bows*
Katana Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
xD Oh, Axel. For PWP, this was really, really great! The end sort of reminds me of that Dane Cook skit where he's like, "My girlfriend says to me, 'Dane, all men care about is sex,' and I said to her, 'Look, finish blowing me, and then we'll talk.'" xD
DarkeAngelle chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
the last sentence cracked me up, not like i wasnt giggling the entire time xD good job! i loved it~ i also like eating ice cream in the winter :D
Aria6 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Very good smut and amusing. :) I like it!
Zeroinfinity chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Oh wow X3 Besides being wickedly erotic, this was extremely amusing. I loved all the funny bits you weaved in. "Popsicle-abused" was just so clever but I especially liked the last line, I couldn't help but crack up

But I must say, melted ice cream would have made the perfect lube for Roxas, although Axel licking it clean off him was just as intriguing.
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