|Reviews for What Never Should Be: New Beginnings|
| sd4ianto chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Sorry not really commenting. Though I love this series. I just noticed it wasn't showing up on my favorites.
| Bloodsong 13T chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
i really am enjoying this series. in fact, i daresay i like it better than the original. i know it doesn't make sense for a tv show to make its lead hero's facade of strength and bravado be real thin. but heck, any guy with an inner child is okay in my book! they shoulda got a dog, though... :X that would've driven you nuts as an author. ;D
| Mourning Star under the Moon chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Tiny continuity error - in the previous chapter, you say that her capture was a month and a half ago. Here, you say she's been locked up for four months. Logically speaking, the timelines don't match up.
Still brilliant, though - never forget that!
| DarkwingDuckie chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
Love the sequel! Tosh is just so amazing! And then the Ianto/bullet mystery... Really loving this 'verse!
| IShipItAllAndThenSome chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
I want. To hug. The crap out of: you, Jack, Ianto, and Tosh.
| FaceChanger chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
Hi. It's me again. Um, yeah. I was rereading this because I don't want to do my math homework and this stuck out at me and bothered me. A lot. "'UNIT salvaged them from an incident in London during World War II, apparently.'"
Okay. Plot purposes. I get it. But regardless of when UNIT itself was formed (which I'm not actually sure about myself...) it wouldn't have been around during WWII. There is a very simple reason for this. UNIT was originally part of the UN, though I don't think they are as of the new series. The UN was not formed until 1945, AFTER WWII ended. Therefore, being an International Studies student, I find this annoying...
Not going to ask you to change it or anything (though if you did you could always say that they scavenged it from Torchwood One), because I know how annoying that could be and for all I know Fischer is lying and I should just shut up and stop being a nerd. Eheh, sorry... I just wanted to point it out. Rest assured that the fact I was rereading your story in the first place means that I like it enough not to really care too terribly much...
I apologize for my nerdiness...
| Lynka Read chapter 5 . 4/18/2011
I love it
| Nyjen chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Just wanted to say (before I start reading this), I was following What Never Should Be and lost track right before the last chapter, but I remembered it the other day and really wanted to finish it, so I've just finished reading it and I can't understand how your story got onto the "Torchwood Bad Fic" Community because I thought it was very well thought out and I loved the way you managed to fit it into the Doctor Who episodes. And I'm not going to write any more on this review because I can't wait to read the next lot. x
| WickedBlue chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
I so love your vulnerable Jack and how Ianto takes care of him. Great way of bringing Tosh in, too.
| bellykaat chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Beautiful introduction to Tosh. Thanks!
| Destined Darkness chapter 5 . 2/19/2010
That was extreamly close
| Orion Lyonesse chapter 5 . 2/15/2010
Having just come off reading the long beginning story, this short one wasn't enough! Way to leave us with a cliff-hanger though.
Loved that Fischer got his comeuppance! Also glad to see the Doctor still coming around to help when needed. I like the Brigadier. Think I met the actor at a convention one year, a long time ago.
Now, on to the next story!
| Orion Lyonesse chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Oh, very nice! I loved the exchange between Jack and Markson! Hysterical!
I continue to enjoy the relationship between Ianto and Jack and their dialog together. I enjoyed this chapter, filling in the blanks between Torchwood and Tosh. It all made a lot of sense.
| rain angst chapter 5 . 1/21/2010
This is extremely good. Ianto had a really close call. But how did the bullet not go through? Are you going to continue this story? I really hope so, it is really good and I would love to see if Ianto ever figures out why the bullet didn't go through him.
| meMyselfSelf chapter 5 . 1/19/2010
please an other sequel!