Reviews for Said the Spider to the Fly
Rogue Tomato chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I'm having a grand time reading your old stories. You have a fascinating writing style that is unmatched. I truly enjoy the time I get to spend in the scenarios you create.
randomplotbunny chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Fantastic!
john'sgirlfriend2date chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Whoa!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Wow! That's all I can really say is wow! It took a few minutes for me to understand the style of who was speaking, thoughts, etc, but that was creepy and awesome all at the same time!
Caia Caecilia chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Creepy but super :). I love your writing. Clever Gibbs, bluffing the bad guy to get the answers he needed. You write a very good psycho by the way lol.
iizninja chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I loved every bit of it!

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Veryfairygirl14 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Some species of spiders should be crushed under heel as eggs.
Robin Grimm-Goodfellow chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
This seems really, really interesting and cool, but I might like it better if you gave me a simple, little explanation as to what happened. It might be helpfull, you know, with the whole understanding processes of our brains, you see.
C. E. Mott chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Wow. This is absolutely amazing. I love the style of the writing and how it is from the killer's point of view! Wonderful work.
Shinju90 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Wow...That was great! I love the way the story was told, from the point of view of the 'spider.' Pretty damn creepy. I'd love to know just how Tim found him, wow. Awesome story!
shialuvr222 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Wow. This is a great story! I love it!
dnachemlia chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
That was *so* good. Your monster makes Dexter look warm and fuzzy.

I loved how the "spider" got trapped by Gibbs and McGee. Classic.
Maudlin Mush chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
wow! powerful. You really created a monster. Thank you!
irish gal 2 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Wow, just WOW. Completly blew my mind. The format was amazing and the suspense of the story was awesome. WOW.
letsplaypretend chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
this was... god. this was amazing. i didn't really like it at first- the format was crazy weird, and the first person view was even odder, but then i got into it. and i really thought you killed them all-but that little "i dont like happy endings" MOMENTS before we find out they're all alive?

EPIC.

great job!
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