|Reviews for Elevators, Assistants and Attraction|
| Lillywhite1 chapter 3 . 9/11
Thanks for writing this wonderfull story!
| Eliella45 chapter 3 . 3/12
Great chapter, nice to see it from Edward's point of view.
| Eliella45 chapter 2 . 3/12
Poor Edward, suffered so much, didn't he? ;-) Nice chapter.
| Eliella45 chapter 1 . 3/12
Very lovely to get a peak into Edward's head. Great job.
| Jojo657 chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
i wud luv 2 read more of the story in his p.o.v please update soon
| kinsano chapter 3 . 11/7/2011
I enjoyed reading Edward's take on this story.
| Allisonrose5 chapter 3 . 5/10/2011
Please write more I enjoy the way you have it set up except for the jacob thing
| ClumsyShopaholic chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
| MaEsTaMa chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
For the chapter that you put in EPOV in the other story you can put those chapter in JamesPOV
| Emc3015 chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
I enjoyed EPOV. I am sorry you are no longer writing Twi-ff.
| EverlastingMuse chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
| TalksToMirrors chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I'm leaving you love by the dussins! Love both of these stories and was really sad to see it end, and i still harbor hope for more updates on this one!
| Fliberty chapter 3 . 5/25/2010
This is really good. I like the idea of Edward and Jacob sparring verbally in their meeting. You managed to make Jacob suitably irritating to Edward too.
Do you plan to write any more of these?
I'd love to read more of Edward's POV e.g.
- Edward's date with Tanya when he sees Bella with Jacob
- their trip to Seattle
- the trip to the pub when Bella gets drunk would be great too
| Fliberty chapter 2 . 5/25/2010
This is really good. You write Edward well. There's also no harm in reading this scene twice!
It's funny that Edward and Bella have thoughts along the same lines in the conference room. They both think the other is working normally while trying not to get caught staring. The kitchen scene is great from Edward's POV too, very hot indeed.
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I like reading the other side of this story. I also like your Edward, a lot.