Reviews for Cats in the Cradle |
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![]() ![]() Much too lazy to log (since I'm at college writing this in between classes). You must update more! The long wait between chapters is killing me! Just an FYI :) as someone posted before me, be careful with the whole to/two/too thing...little quirks but can get annoying to some! Awesome work though...keep it up :) One more thing...at the moment it's a little too much like the books themselves and i liked the direction your story was heading by staying on your own storyline and not the books! Great job though :) |
![]() ![]() I'm too lazy to log in. This story... has awesome plot and potential, everyone is in character, overall, it's just amazing. The biggest issue is you have a lot of annoying little mistakes in the chapters, the biggest being the wrong to/two/too. I beta-read, if you need any help. Anyhoo, the story's still great and I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? This story hasn't been updated in almost *checks calendar* seven days? What is this? Sorry, just a little enthusiastic. I've read the whole thing in two days and can't wait for more. You watch Once Upon A Time as well? I love that show! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next update! (BTW loved the comment about the Steelers, GO BRONCOS! LOL) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, so that's how you tell if someone's really tired: they start repeating derogrative quotes from AVPM(S). |
![]() ![]() I loved the story so far ( i really liked it better than the book) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter and Minerva's reasoning about Albus! Of course, judging from Harry and Hermione's reactions, I'd wager that Albus cannot drive very well, can he? UPDATE WHENEVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one! Thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. Wonder why Hermione heard nothing? Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah you do deserve it this is great! aw i love it how over-protective minerva is its so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow intense. I wonder why Hermione lost all her senses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG A FELLOW RAVENS FAN! I grew up in MD so the Baltimore Ravens have always been my team. I can't believe the luck We had this season! On the other hand, great chapie! It was nice, if a bit short. Keep it up! LP |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter! is this a harry/hermione story? update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, you are sooooooooooooo lucky to be able to go to the HP theme park. |