|Reviews for Where the Light Is|
| kezcullen chapter 12 . 1/15/2012
now i am really not getting it. they are married to others but are lying to their new partners from the start. what is standing in their way? why did they even marry in the first place?
| kezcullen chapter 4 . 1/15/2012
just read to here and am wondering what the big reveal is going to be- why these 2 just didnt get together?
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 17 . 10/22/2010
". Her lips were always so puffy by the time she left " LOL
And when she wanted to make love to himand he asked time, it was nice, but she was lucky, imagine Em arriving there... LOL
I had an idea that maybe Rose and Em made a huge mistake in the past that has enormous consequences couple, it's very said.
Hey, as i said before, love your ffic, but i'd like to kmow if we have more chapters, or if you are just give a hint ok?No pressure i just would like to know if i'm going to be lucky and read from you about my lovely and fave couple together (finally).Because i'm sure as heel when you write this chapter and i read it, i'll cry and bc it will be powerful and laugh bc they made it.
XO from Brazil.
I have to buy a box or boxes of tissues, i'm sure!
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 16 . 10/22/2010
She didn't have to say anything more than that. They both knew exactly where he would be on June 20th, because if he knew where she was he couldn't deny himself a brief glimpse of the only light he had ever known.
Oh Edward i want to scream when i read your pain...
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 15 . 10/22/2010
"He turned, and there was a brief moment in which he thought that he could see eternity in her eyes. This girl would tear him down piece by piece, and he would let her. There was no fighting it."
Maybe it's difficult when your parents are fighting all the time, and you don't want to believe love is a possibility, bc when you let it be one, it can bring you pain, so you just 's what he is doing, hiding himself, but he is just a teenager who has a lot of responsability on his shoulder, especially when it towards his siblings, what i think sweet and unfair.
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 14 . 10/22/2010
Eric seems a lovely husband, but there is no Love, at least Bella doesn't feel it, she likes his protection,his company and his love, she feels i blame her? she has a second chance to make her happy again and give Eric a chance to find happiness too.
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 13 . 10/22/2010
the tea party was bb steps was mature, that's why it hurt too much when they finally said...goodbye when the summer was and strong love.
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 12 . 10/22/2010
...tears...lots of them...
'and once he finally heard it, really heard it, it sounded like goodnight. It would always sound like goodnight, because he couldn't fathom her goodbye.'
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 11 . 10/22/2010
She always said 'goodnight' 'cause it sounded hollow and empty and there was a chance that they would never see each other again.
He always said 'goodbye' 'cause' the good things in his life rarely lasted, and he wouldn't let her go without a goodbye
I like Bella's idea 's more positive and brings more hope to Edward!
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 10 . 10/22/2010
Gosh E is driving me crazy, he says no and he sends that wonderful/romantic msg.
Their love story is really bittersweet.
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 8 . 10/22/2010
"with hello there is always a goodbye. Bella was his favorite hello, but she would always be his hardest goodbye."
God bless you, you know how to write.I just hope i can see EB love... :)
You have talent.
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 7 . 10/22/2010
Now you did it- a tiny tear has made a path down my cheek as i read this girl. :) I'm being serious about the tear. :(
And he is so careful with his siblings, it swells my Emmet is such a nice guy, but i LOL when i read his mom made snack to feed an army and he was generous and gave E 'HALF' of his sandwich. Half? Oh Em you are such a starved boy.
XO from Brazil
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 6 . 10/22/2010
Each word i read and each way they describe their feelings i feel so sad.
" She felt unbelievably guilty for not calling Eric, but her heart would want to tell him that it never actually belonged to him. Bella couldn't allow her renegade heart to take control." Her heart never belong to his husband...
I hpoe i can see love too, it too painful, i like to read it but it makes me sad.( I think you are doing it right, your bringing emotion to our lives) :)
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 5 . 10/22/2010
Sunshine it fits her and their young love! Anoyher great chapter.I just think they were longer. :(
| RKsoulmates913 chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
Gahhh i dont like it a bit, i want to cry out loud. LOL
""The only thing I can't handle is living my entire life, knowing you are out there, and not a part of my life.""
I like you mature way, the way your dialog is, it's not silly things, it's beautiful and just want i like to it's not POV, i love it, when there's no POV.
Congrats for your first, you can be very proud of yourself!